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Description I am afraid of latching onto you,
holding you close with chains
that build a dog collar and tighten
a noose around your neck—
slowly asphyxiating, the two of us
collide; hearts embracing with
stories of old and trials of current—minds
melding with each shared look.thought.touch.
souls journeying to find each other,
ephemeral roads, vanishing before our
innocent eyes—only to reappear
the moment we  p a s s—our eyes too blind
to see time closing in on us.
the stench of sewage did not escape our pores,
yet an odor emanated from our skin—
every pore burst wide, slithering through the air,
coalescing  with the sweet perfume of blushing emotions—
death…the stench was death…
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Comments: 27

Sammur-amat [2012-11-20 17:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on the DLD, this is quite a clever piece!

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to Sammur-amat [2012-11-21 00:49:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Sammur-amat In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-11-21 15:20:50 +0000 UTC]

Surely!

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to Sammur-amat [2012-11-23 04:28:33 +0000 UTC]

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Sammur-amat In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-11-23 10:57:44 +0000 UTC]

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NotenSMSK [2012-11-19 11:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DLD! It looks deep and I could feel it a bit but... eh I didn't really get it perhaps when I will read it again with a clearer mind I shall

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to NotenSMSK [2012-11-21 00:49:35 +0000 UTC]

That's alright, dear.

I am glad you even gave it a chance.

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NotenSMSK In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-11-21 12:58:49 +0000 UTC]

I always manage to disappoint people in this regard but don't worry! I hope to improve my brain processing Someday I will get these works ... hopefully

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to NotenSMSK [2012-11-23 04:30:13 +0000 UTC]

Nah, I'm not disappointed, dear. Although, I do one day hope you may understand these pieces!

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NotenSMSK In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-11-23 22:55:59 +0000 UTC]

I hope so too! I mean... I dunno what is wrong with me

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to NotenSMSK [2012-11-25 11:20:16 +0000 UTC]

Nothing...I don't understand *shehrozeameen 's works...at all.

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NotenSMSK In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-11-25 15:52:08 +0000 UTC]

Hehe... mostly, niether do I but having known him for over 10 years, I know quite a bit due to experience. But yea... there are works that I don't get at all although you should read a few that I understood they are good

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BlakeCurran [2012-11-19 04:57:10 +0000 UTC]

Powerful...

And congrats on the DLD!!

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to BlakeCurran [2012-11-19 05:05:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

Congrats to you as well...I will be taking a look at your piece later

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BlakeCurran In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-11-19 05:29:38 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, and thanks! I appreciate it

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DailyLitDeviations [2012-11-19 03:17:13 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DLD (Daily Literature Deviations) in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by ing the News Article.

Keep writing and keep creating.

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to DailyLitDeviations [2012-11-19 03:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for such a wonderful honor!

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Me2Smart4U [2012-08-26 22:14:34 +0000 UTC]

this is very well written...very deeply expressed...Well Done

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to Me2Smart4U [2012-08-26 22:52:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Me2Smart4U In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-08-26 23:27:04 +0000 UTC]

most welcome

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Shasta-Rose [2012-08-24 18:20:53 +0000 UTC]

I love this. Very eloquent and an interesting idea well-expressed.

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to Shasta-Rose [2012-08-25 03:21:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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intricately-ordinary [2012-08-24 03:42:36 +0000 UTC]

it's not fair, you're writing gets more beautiful with every new piece

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to intricately-ordinary [2012-08-24 03:48:58 +0000 UTC]

psh...if that is what you want to call it...thank you for the comment!

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Contradictory55 [2012-08-24 02:48:22 +0000 UTC]

O_O It's scary in the way only love can be.

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to Contradictory55 [2012-08-24 03:11:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment, m'dear...and that was the point

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Contradictory55 In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-08-24 03:37:33 +0000 UTC]

I thought so You're welcome.

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