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Published: 2012-08-30 03:52:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Description time itself is a bomb—
corroding our hopes 'til naught but skeletons remain,
slamming our faith to the ground—life's essence leaking steadily,
thrashing our dreams into submission (subjugated before reality)…

tic tic tic

the clocks hands shift—
each click shooting bullets of doom
aimed toward the mind of modern society
ricocheting through the mind to the heart.soul.spirit
murdering spirit with ruthless hands, while soul is
system•ati•cal•ly destroyed, colors bleeding from the depths as
heart rips in two—a single jagged line forming the fracture.

tic tic tic
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Comments: 6

tatterdema1ion [2012-09-03 23:44:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh god the rhythm to this is masterful. Well done.

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to tatterdema1ion [2012-09-03 23:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Do you have any advice for the continuation?

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tatterdema1ion In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-09-03 23:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Supernova of existence, blackhole swallowing awareness, nothingness transition?

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to tatterdema1ion [2012-09-03 23:52:06 +0000 UTC]

nothingness transition? The others all sound like excellent ideas! Thank you

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tatterdema1ion In reply to LightOverpowers58 [2012-09-04 00:10:33 +0000 UTC]

I meant it'd all end in nothingness. Sorry. And you're welcome. Any time.

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LightOverpowers58 In reply to tatterdema1ion [2012-09-04 00:19:18 +0000 UTC]

Ha it's fine, I understand!

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