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Published: 2011-01-11 03:07:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Right, this was part of an course task, and this is what i sent in. Check the other three pictures for more views.The gun is very simple textured because it an old model that I only thought fitted the scene and was running out of time
Even if it is simple scene, my second character model ever, I would very much want some comments on how I could improve for my next character modeling.
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Comments: 5
H-only [2011-01-11 12:02:46 +0000 UTC]
I like her body and her clothes but while her clothes especially the black parts looks like the real but her skin still too clean.
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LinuxNoFear In reply to H-only [2011-01-11 13:44:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I know. Didn't put anything on the body skin. Time run out.
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H-only In reply to LinuxNoFear [2011-01-11 15:24:14 +0000 UTC]
However, her clothes is so cool!
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Greipur [2011-01-11 08:00:04 +0000 UTC]
Tjena! Det ser bra ut. Men om du vill ha kritik så vill jag säga till dig att hålla koll på proportionerna. Personen känns alldeles för utdragen (om det nu är en människa och inte en humanoid), särskilt hennes torso. Så träna på anatomi, kolla upp Bridgman, Vilppu osv. och kolla på hur anatomin fungerar. Kroki hjälper enormt det också.
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LinuxNoFear In reply to Greipur [2011-01-11 11:08:26 +0000 UTC]
Tack. Ja ,lite utdragen är hon. Men bara ett halvt huvud längre än 1 på 8. Tror att vinkeln på kameran kan göra att det ser mer ut.
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