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Published: 2004-03-16 03:50:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 208; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Headlights. Shining in my rearview mirrorThunder rumble of the bass
Push a little harder
Light is just a twinkle of stars.
I speed on, chasing the last of darkness
Willing my soul to continue
My free sense of irony…
Open the window…feel the night air
And I give myself to another night
Lest daylight return.
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"feel the night air
And I give myself to another night"
that repetition of night really didn't work for me.
i really like the concept of this, mixing the two forms of art, each eally strengthens the other.
"I speed on, chasing the last of darkness
Willing my soul to continue
My free sense of irony…"
dig that.
and sorry about the tardiness, i have tons of deviations backed up waiting for me to read/view.
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I understand, it's ok. I didn't notice that repetition of "night" thanks for pointing it out. I don't like the repetition either. I think I'll be doing more visual poetry, because it's a lot of fun and helps me use the little extra pictures I have.
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Love it when you work poem and image in together. Has a wonderful effect on the viewer.
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The word lest should be dragged kicking and screaming back into everyday use.
You have my thanks for starting the process.
=]
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No problem. Here's to the tiny language revolution.
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very creative way to mix the poem into the image. im liking the visual effects you got in the BG...
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