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Published: 2019-03-21 00:30:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 182555; Favourites: 3650; Downloads: 431
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playing around some with Stormy and Zipperflash's rivalry and respective backstories, trying to flesh them out a bit more


1.) "I wanna be just like you, Mama!"

Perhaps it was just coincidence that Lightning Dust disbanded her extreme aeronautics team, The Washouts, after a bad stunt landed her only child her in the hospital.

2.)
For most of Stormy's life, he was content being a scrawny hippie, happily strumming his ukulele and snoozing on top of clouds. He didn't gel with his parents' emphasis on competition and athleticism....Stormy's always been a go-with-the-flow kind of guy. At least, that's how he'd describe himself.....Mama Dash would probably use words like "ridiculously lazy" and "zero ambition".

Stormy's always been kind of a D student, but his difficulty with school becomes insurmountable as he enters his teens. He has some complex learning issues (dyslexia, ADHD) that have gone hidden and undiagnosed, as well as a lot of academic anxiety that pushes him to the brink of flunking out. Not especially confident in his ability to prevent that, Stormy opts to drop out and join Wonderbolt Academy. Flying is easier than literary analysis, after all.

3.) Oh wait no, turns out flight school is actually really hard? Sergeant Spitfire isn't a very patient pony, especially when it comes to hippie-dippie idiots that'd rather cloud-watch than compete.

4.) Time passes. Stormy doesn't like the Wonderbolt standard-issue haircut for new recruits, he doesn't like the emphasis on conformity and deference to authority, he doesn't especially like Sergeant Spitfire and her love of barking orders in his ears. But he does like that Rainbow seems to be genuinely proud of him now. Stormy's a naturally fast flier, and as he trains under Spitfire and Rainbow, he's able to outclass his peers with ease. With a bit more effort, Stormy starts smashing speed records left and right. He wins a medal, then fifteen more to match. To his surprise, he begins amassing a fan following. "Aerostorm" becomes a well-known name among Wonderbolt enthusiasts....and Stormy, for the first time in his life, develops a bit of an ego....

5.) And then young new hotshot Zipperflash promptly stomps it into the ground. His speed is so ludicrous that Stormy's left in the dust, wondering what in the hell just happened. Who is this guy?

(little does Stormy know, Zipperflash is actually a huge fan (with a huge crush): )

6.) After suffering under Zip's bold taunts and smug victories, Stormy decided that not only would he beat Zips in a race, he'll also make him cry. He puts his all into their next race, and in the final lap, Stormy surges into first place in an explosive burst of speed, so intense it generates lightning. Zipperflash is struck by a stray bolt and sent crashing down, and for a while, things look very grim.

7.) The crash is ruled an accident, and Stormy is ruled the fair victor. But he can't enjoy any part of it, because he almost killed someone. He was so caught up in winning and training and being the best that Zipperflash could have died. Should have died. Stormy's so sick with shame that he can't eat. He misses practice. Won't show his face to anypony. Won't give an interview. Can't sleep.

He sends lots of flowers and apology cards to Zips in the hospital, but it does little to soothe his mind. Finally, he summons the courage to visit his rival, give Zipperflash his golden medal, and announce that he's quitting racing, forever.

Zipperflash is angry and hurt. Not about the accident- after all, injuries are inherent to his career- but because Stormy, his rival, his long-admired hero, just up and fucking quit. After one little hiccup. Zips will recover and be back in the air in no time, so what's the big goddamn deal? Why can't Aero look him in the eye? What a coward. What a rotten, miserable goddamn quitter. Zips doesn't need him to be the best. He'll be the best damned flier in the world, no stupid rivalry necessary.

....Did Zips do something wrong?

After Stormy retires in shame, he wanders around Equestria, doing odd jobs, jumping into reckless, ill-fitting relationships (*cough*Chakra Blossom*coughcough*), searching for something to fill the void in his life and give him a sense of purpose. It isn't until years later- when he befriends an old classmate, Bruce- that he begins feeling brave enough to start flying again (mostly because Bruce wouldn't stop badgering him about it, "You mean ya used to be a world-class flier and you just quit?"). I imagine his rematch race with Zipperflash would be hyped to hell and back by the pegasi of Cloudsdale, with everypony, especially Zips himself, eagerly anticipating Aero's return (Zips can't wait, he's really upped the game on his trash talk and he totally isn't going to get all stupid and star-struck again no sir)



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Comments: 135

Loryska In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 03:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Β I really appreciate this new growth on Stormy's character. It's hard to imagine him ever having an ego, and this is an excellent justification for why that would be. Great story as always dude.

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Zcat91819 In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 03:42:44 +0000 UTC]

It's nice to to get more background on those two.

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Backlash91 In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 03:30:31 +0000 UTC]

" I imagine his rematch race with Zipperflash would be hyped to hell and back by the pegasi of Cloudsdale, with everypony, especially Zips himself, eagerly anticipating Aero's return (Zips can't wait, he's really upped the game on his trash talkΒ and he totally isn't going to get all stupid and star-struck again no sir)"


we need to see more of these two!!!

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WingMcCallister In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 03:26:00 +0000 UTC]

I can really feel that moment .. if it ever arises.. when Zips and Stormy have that talk... when the real underlying feelings and reasons get revealed. Creamy.

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SmilesPerHour In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 03:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow. This is... I have no words. Your stories are just as compelling as your artwork, and frankly, I'm seeing Stormy in a new light. I can't say I wouldn't do the same in his situation. I feel horrible whenever I do something wrong, even if it's an accident. But I'm glad to see that Stormy finally set things right and found himself again.

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sweetspea In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 02:53:29 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely fantastic!!Β  You've always been wonderful at world building, especially when it comes to Bruce's backstory and all of his crazy-awful family, and now this too!!Β Β 

Stormy's always been a character I've absolutely adored and wanted to learn more about, and hoo boy did you deliver with this!!Β  Those last few panels absolutely destroy me.Β  Seeing Stormy go from what he once was to what he is now is a hell of a trip, and you did every single part of it beautifully.Β  I feel awful for both Stormy and Zip, but this especially made me feel for Zip.Β  Poor guy has been forced to hold the weight of giants his entire life (and his transition surely could not of been easy), whose worth is determined by the speed of his body, and to be knocked out of the air by the one person close to his age he's admired his entire life, only to have that person quit before Zip can show them how goodΒ he can be?Β  That must be devastating.Β  A kick in the teeth, both metaphorically and literally in poor Zip's case

I would really love to see Lightning's reaction to finding out the notorious Aerostorm knocked her boy out of the air and almost ended his flight career, then fled with his title.Β  Poor Zipper, he's done some awful things but having Lightning as a mum could not of been easy, and this just seems like another failure to him on a long list of others.Β  On top of that, his idol has up and disappeared after shoving him into the ground and taking gold

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missuny In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 02:53:10 +0000 UTC]

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KillingKisa In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 02:49:35 +0000 UTC]

omg I love Zipp and Storm

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PUNKPRIDE In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 02:44:05 +0000 UTC]

I see you’re making young Zips have a more feminine look for the trans headcannon, I love it.

You’ve really developed him well, he reminds me of my younger self when I was coming out and the anxieties and peer pressures of my parents.

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Australian-Senior In reply to PUNKPRIDE [2019-03-21 02:44:58 +0000 UTC]

lop confirmed trans!zips canon a while ago now on tumblr iirc

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PUNKPRIDE In reply to Australian-Senior [2019-03-21 02:46:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh whoops I meant cannon. I know how to word things I swear lmao

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HoneyPupDragon In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 02:43:27 +0000 UTC]

It's a bit triggering when Zipperflash talks shit to Stormy so I can't help feeling unsympathetic (a little?) when he gets his ass landed in the hospital for being a shit towards Stormy, if anything, he deserves it, for the most part.Β 
If you ever draw them in the future again, it'd be funny if Bruce threatens to rip Zipper's chicken-feathers off if he catches him shit-talking his hippie 'friend'.

Zipper: I'm so ready to kick yer arse, you just wait-

Bruce: *steps in* Kickin' arse is my specialty, especially this one *nuzzles Stormy's ass*Β 
And you aren't allowed to kick this one, ya' here?

Zipper: Who says, Short-stack?

Bruce: *glares menacingly at Zipper and steps closer to him* My hoof up yer' arse if you keep those insults up.

Zipper:Β  Β 

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Creative-Dreams14 In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 02:40:26 +0000 UTC]

i am left rather in awe of these developments!
i adore this!

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jendoes In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 02:28:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh

Yes
Yes
Yes

Eyes!

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Keddwar [2019-03-21 01:51:25 +0000 UTC]

But did Spitfire tell him about the full-body wing-and-hoof cast, drinking through a straw.........IN A VAN DOWN BY THE RIVER?!

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shellielle [2019-03-21 01:50:39 +0000 UTC]

This is so cute!Β 

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Toshiro-Hitsugaya-31 [2019-03-21 01:37:56 +0000 UTC]

holey heck-in is Stormy fricken cute with that short hair. And those eyes. Wow. Very nicely done fleshing out their rivalry relationship :>Β 

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KaeWolfe [2019-03-21 01:37:02 +0000 UTC]

Omg totally didn't expect that last few pics for some reason (even though I've seen 1 of the 3). That hit me hard ;n;
Really really loving the more fleshed out backstories!
You give me inspiration

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ThetrueFebruary31 [2019-03-21 01:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Damn that was delicious. Thanks for the meal.

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LadySionis [2019-03-21 01:17:08 +0000 UTC]

DAMN I LOVE YOUR STORYTELLING!!

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clearwolf [2019-03-21 01:08:08 +0000 UTC]

omg! i can feel the tension ! y fav absolutely

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tpalacios17 In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 01:03:04 +0000 UTC]

I wonder how Rainbow Dash reacts to all of this, specifically Zipper's injuries?Β  Does Stormy ever talk to his mom about how he truly felt during his time in the Wonderbolts?Β  Does she feel that Zipper's near-death experience was in part her fault, because she pushed so much of her competitive nature onto her kid that it inadvertently unlocked such a dangerous skill?Β  Β Β 

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EspyFandoms In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 01:01:49 +0000 UTC]

*feels heart break more than it already is at the last 2 drawings*
Welp. I didn't need those in one piece anyways. ;w;

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AmyMalene [2019-03-21 01:00:57 +0000 UTC]

Considering they came from two different worlds, I'm not surprised that Zips doesn't understand why Stormy did what he did after that fatal race.Β  I do wonder if they would ever talk about it?Β  Even if they are both grumpy old colts.

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MiaMaha [2019-03-21 01:00:01 +0000 UTC]

Ohmygoshohno I've been keeping up with all of the Aerostorm updates on Patreon but only now have seen number 6 and my h e a r t
Geez I feel so horrible for both of them....but I REALLY, REALLY love the direction you've taken Aero's backstory, with the accident followed by guilt and shame and his eventual return to flying. You've really done such a great job adding more depth to Aero's character and story!

MEANWHILE I really love the lightning effects in 6, the red and blue sparks look so freaking cool.

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CastoroChiaro In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 00:55:12 +0000 UTC]

Oof. Poor Stormy. And poor Zipperflash! Just a couple of sad boys.

It's interesting learning more about Aerostorm's development. I'd actually be pretty interested in seeing more of his "glory days" as a competitive racer, and how different his personality was at that point in time.

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PegasusMare In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 00:47:20 +0000 UTC]

Omg I would LOVE yo see the Zips and Stormy future rematch! Zipperflash getting all flustered and feather fluffy over big beautiful aero storm and his scary husband Bruce. And even if Zips wins I can imagine him being disappointed at how close it was, considering Stormy hasn't flown, let alone practiced, in years.Β 

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AnomalousZoologist [2019-03-21 00:47:19 +0000 UTC]

Holy SMOKES, I had no idea he ever quit...Β 
Good to see Brucie was able to get him back out there, and hopefully Zipps will eventually be able to confess his totally platonic rivalry crush to Stormy.

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bryonygriffiths [2019-03-21 00:46:40 +0000 UTC]

Never stop, Lop, I love your stuff!Β  It makes my day when I see a new post from you.

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MLP-HeartSong-FiM In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 00:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Super cool!!

Poor stormy, he's trying..

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HazelGatoya In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 00:38:53 +0000 UTC]

Zips does not know how deal with his feelings in such extremes that it's painful.

And it's nice to get some more backstory on the hippie racing boy. Poor Stormy.Β 

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Madness-Made-Fresh In reply to ??? [2019-03-21 00:36:32 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful! I'm not crying, you are!

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Jade-the-Guilmon [2019-03-21 00:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Starstruck? Don't ya mean Stormstruck? owo

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Whitelupine In reply to Jade-the-Guilmon [2019-03-21 00:42:26 +0000 UTC]

More like Thunderstruck 8D

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Iowasi In reply to Whitelupine [2019-03-21 01:30:03 +0000 UTC]

"Lightningstruck" would make more sense since thunder is just the sound...

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EspyFandoms In reply to Whitelupine [2019-03-21 00:58:38 +0000 UTC]

Eeeeyyyyyy!

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Murder0fCrows [2019-03-21 00:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Poor babyΒ 

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