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LOSTACIDjoKer — In Loving Memory
Published: 2007-04-17 05:14:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description There are so many unanswered questions
So many tied up lies
Too many fallen soldiers
Loved ones not meant to die

Emotions running higher each moment
Everyone at point break
The release is so sweet
Calmness can consume you

Take a relaxing moment and ponder
Search your deepest soul
Consider all your anger
Consider all your despair

Pray to the heavens for peace
Believe in the warmth
Consider the sacrifice
Everyone makes mistakes

And now, you can realize
See no more despair
Anger drifts away
The Lord has set you free

Let your loved ones rest, sleep
Emotions can still peak
Let the peace surround you
One day we will all meet again
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Comments: 8

ShortPenguin [2007-05-28 22:44:32 +0000 UTC]

It's very beautiful.
Sometimes, you can get the most inspiration from other people, being empathetic I mean. It produces great things like this and helps them when they need it. I'm sure they appreciated this a lot.

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bloodygoth [2007-04-25 05:43:46 +0000 UTC]

wow very nicely written

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LOSTACIDjoKer In reply to bloodygoth [2007-05-02 20:28:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks, it had been so long since I had something worthile written and I guess the situation at hand kind of sparked it back into being

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bloodygoth In reply to LOSTACIDjoKer [2007-05-05 17:55:47 +0000 UTC]

ya my writting has died down a lot and most of the stuff i come up with isnt worth even reading. but i really enjoyed reading this

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LOSTACIDjoKer In reply to bloodygoth [2007-05-06 03:42:28 +0000 UTC]

well keep trying, you can never get something right if you dont try... or something like that the saying goes... something about never know till you try or keep trying it gets better... I don't remember. either way, keep up and don't lose hope sometimes you just get into a rut and then poof you out again. all you need is to locate your "muse" or the thing or person that inspires you, follow it, learn from it and you can frow.

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bloodygoth In reply to LOSTACIDjoKer [2007-05-14 03:27:42 +0000 UTC]

sweet. thanks for the advice. i will keep your words in mind.

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LOSTACIDjoKer In reply to bloodygoth [2007-05-17 18:47:09 +0000 UTC]

no problem, glad to help

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Rayli [2007-04-17 15:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Powerful work. I am glad that you were able to offer this to the family, and I hope it will help them as they go through their grief.

And - I believe it fits this gallery perfectly.

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