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loudwisdom β€” Muse
Published: 2008-04-15 03:04:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 245; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Muse

He inhibits the very keys I bounce
Playing like a pianist on their marble teeth
Echoes of reflected inhibitions reverberate
Filling the empty room with sounds of emotions at work
He’s the mayor to my inner town hall
The master key sits patiently on his pressboard desk
He left me once again
Leaving me here, like a blind Seeing Eye dog
Perhaps his vacation will recharge his batteries
Trying to play an emotional symphony, solo
I’ll check the mail every day for a postcard
Till the day comes I see you lower from the heavens
Emerging from the horizon line
Plop yourself beside me against our morning tree
Discussing your adventures without me as we sip the espresso away
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Comments: 23

kittenmarie [2008-04-15 21:00:58 +0000 UTC]

ooooh O.o i really like this one! its happiness. keep it up

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loudwisdom In reply to kittenmarie [2008-04-15 22:33:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, i will!

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colormehappy19 [2008-04-15 18:02:00 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant! I love it. Amazing. Much better than my work.

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loudwisdom In reply to colormehappy19 [2008-04-15 22:33:12 +0000 UTC]

pfft please do not speak lies. Your work is amazing but i do thank you for the nice words

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colormehappy19 In reply to loudwisdom [2008-04-16 02:42:26 +0000 UTC]

Then I say no problem for the nice words, and I speak truth. Besides, I have writer's block right now, my four year old niece's poems would be better than the crap I'm spewing out. Lol.

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loudwisdom In reply to colormehappy19 [2008-04-16 02:44:15 +0000 UTC]

lol well i doubt that cause your work is amazing. Hopefully everyones emotional batteries will recharge soon

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colormehappy19 In reply to loudwisdom [2008-04-16 20:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah I hope so. I need to write something. :]

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Gnog [2008-04-15 17:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Really great!

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loudwisdom In reply to Gnog [2008-04-15 22:32:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^-^

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Out-Of-Spite [2008-04-15 13:40:13 +0000 UTC]

You lost your muse to rien? I'm sure he'll come back!

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loudwisdom In reply to Out-Of-Spite [2008-04-15 22:32:15 +0000 UTC]

-shrug hopefully. thanks

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Out-Of-Spite In reply to loudwisdom [2008-04-16 17:28:14 +0000 UTC]

no prob. If not then I hope you find another muse! lol. It took me years to figure out my muse is a CITY and not a person

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loudwisdom In reply to Out-Of-Spite [2008-04-16 22:48:33 +0000 UTC]

wise words. im glad you have broadened your emotional perception ^-^

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Out-Of-Spite In reply to loudwisdom [2008-04-16 22:54:11 +0000 UTC]

I hope you can do the same!

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Misplaced-Marbles [2008-04-15 13:26:58 +0000 UTC]

beautiful, i wish i had a muse, wouldnt mind if i had to share it...but i often feel like issac newton...gettin hit on the head by apples of ideas

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loudwisdom In reply to Misplaced-Marbles [2008-04-15 22:32:01 +0000 UTC]

lol great metaphor i love it. and thank you

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champoyradoo [2008-04-15 11:40:34 +0000 UTC]

great job @_@

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loudwisdom In reply to champoyradoo [2008-04-15 22:31:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much

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lostdrawings [2008-04-15 06:28:10 +0000 UTC]

i like irony of the blind seeing eye dog hehe...and the pianist simile ( I think thats how u spell it..forgot..sorry ><") =S

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loudwisdom In reply to lostdrawings [2008-04-15 22:31:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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seascape21 [2008-04-15 03:08:37 +0000 UTC]

Magnifique

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loudwisdom In reply to seascape21 [2008-04-15 03:09:36 +0000 UTC]

merci ^-^

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seascape21 In reply to loudwisdom [2008-04-15 03:11:43 +0000 UTC]

de rien

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