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Luce-foxeh — Fragmentation Ch1
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Description Samus was afraid.


It was as simple as this: Here she was on yet another hostile planet, fighting one of the only allies she’d ever had. The growling noises he emitted now were feral, mindless. The bounty hunter she’d known was gone; in his place was just another enemy, to be quickly exterminated like all the others.


And she’d hoped this one would be different. It served her right; she’d trusted him, and now once they were alone he was suddenly her enemy.


Samus’ train of thought was interrupted when a block of ice destroyed the large crystal she’d been using for protection. She barely managed to jump away when he started shooting; the woman was still finding it hard to believe that her ally was fighting her.


“Hey! It’s me, Samus! Don’t you remember?” She tried yelling at him for the thousandth time, only to receive a frustrated growl and a block of ice thrown her way. Samus would not allow herself to let go of the tears that were stinging at her eyes; she wasn’t that weak. No matter how much this sudden betrayal hurt her, she wouldn’t allow herself to express pain in any form.


“Do you even know who you’re fighting?” This was said in a rougher tone, though her voice cracked on the last word. The alien paused for a moment, and Samus could swear she saw him cock his head to one side, as if curious. The short amount of time in which Samus held her breath proved to be nearly fatal.


Somehow, in those few seconds, her fellow bounty hunter managed to shoot her in the arm, generate more icy armor around himself… and tackle her, pinning her to the floor.


This was certainly not the most ideal situation.


She wasn’t sure what had happened, but after barely a few seconds of struggling, the alien was off of her, shrieking. The smoke curling upwards from her arm cannon told Samus all that she needed to know.


The accidentally fired missile had punctured her old ally’s chest armor, causing the PED device to crack. Trickles of Phazon ran in slow, steady streams down his torso. The sight seemed to infuriate him. With a loud roar, he was upon her again.


All Samus could do was cry out in frustrated surprise as she sidestepped, shooting wildly as the alien passed. She almost didn’t want to fire at him, but if he was going to try and kill her then she had no choice but to protect herself.


He came up snarling, thin lines of white smoke rising from the now-blunt icicles rising from his back and shoulders. A faint sizzling noise could be heard coming from that general area; Samus would have thought it comical if she’d been fighting someone else.


Anyone else.


He was about to charge at her again when she yelled out once more, desperate.


“Rundas!” He halted almost immediately at the sound of his name. The alien looked incredibly dazed, unsure of how he was supposed to react. In that moment, Samus could swear that she saw a bit of him left in his wide, confused eyes.


She scarcely had time to consider this, for a moment later he was charging again. A sudden flare of blue-purple before her made her fire every missile she had left erratically, her eyes shut tight as she braced for the imminent impact.


There was none.


Confused, she looked around her. No angels, no hellfire. How was she alive? An agonized groan drew her attention to the ground before her. A sharp intake of breath marked her shock at the sight that she was met with.


She’d somehow managed to fire every missile she’d had on her, and sadly they all found their mark. Rundas lay before her, face pressed into the ground. The position he was in almost struck her as funny; his limbs were sprawled out, he was flat on the floor, and he was twitching slightly. Instead of being humorous, the sight horrified her.


The sounds rumbling from his throat were neither growl nor whimper- Samus could only describe them as inarticulate noises of extreme pain.


Samus was up in an instant, attempting to locate the blue flash she’d just seen out of the corner of her eye. She barely had time to yell something before she started firing wildly at the blur she registered as her Phazon-powered twin.


The creature was gone as soon as it appeared, and after a moment of scanning the bounty hunter refocused her attention on her fallen ally. She turned not a moment too soon; his hand was slightly raised, and as soon as she saw the icy particles gathering beneath him she knew what he was trying to do.


She yelled declination as she dove for him, pinning down his arms in an attempt to stop him from forming the ice. Samus ignored the cries of indignation coming from beneath her; she held him down despite what he might have become. He was still her ally, and like he’d said before… she owed him one.


After a few moments, his struggling ceased. Samus pulled back cautiously to look at him, careful to keep her hands at his forearms.


There weren’t words to describe what Rundas looked like. His expression was open, helpless. If one were to give the look on his face a particular name, it would be ‘broken’. His eyes were shut tight, as if he was trying to block out some unwanted sight that was floating just before his eyes. The PED device at his chest was shattered almost beyond recognition; the fluid running steadily down his sides seemed to consist mainly of Phazon, but the growing pool beneath him was made up of his blood.


Her eyes were forced from his wounds from a low rumbling noise. For a moment she looked around the open area, confused. Had one of the locals decided to drop in and be shot? It occurred to her after a few moments that the noise had come from her ally.


“What?” Her voice was gentle, almost, coaxing. She had no idea if he’d been growling at her or speaking, but to her great dis-ease, a huge part of her longed for it to be the latter. She moved one hand slightly, and as soon as she did the ice was forming again. With a cry of dismay she held him down again, her gaze almost frightful.


Almost.


Again, that noise. Samus leaned a bit closer to the alien, trying to study his features. “…are you saying something?” she asked, once again in that soft tone. His response shocked her.


“Why can’t you just let me and get it over with?” Despite the obvious pain he was in, the Phrygisian managed to raise his voice nearly to a yell, glaring daggers at the human before him.


It was unclear to both of them whether the underlying tone to his words was growl or sob.


“Just… just let me…”


The words that followed made no sense to either of them. They didn’t need to. All sense of things mattering at all went with those final words, really, though neither of them seemed to notice it.


She had no clue how he’d ended up in her arms, head on her shoulder. Even long after it was over, Rundas would never be able to recall why he was crying, and why he’d allowed himself to be touched in such ways. Samus’s arms had stayed firmly around him, almost cradling him despite the considerable difference in size.


As Rundas drifted into unconsciousness, he could almost swear she was rocking him. That couldn’t be true, could it? They both did have a certain dignity to uphold. Still, being supported like that was a nice change, and the comforting words he heard mumbled sounded so clear and soft-spoken, as if some sort of angel was whispering in his ear.

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Comments: 26

blackdragon24 [2013-04-26 04:41:05 +0000 UTC]

If you want us to despise your work... We'll still like it, if we like it. Deal with it.

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Luce-foxeh In reply to blackdragon24 [2013-04-26 16:49:49 +0000 UTC]

Um
Ok
Dude, I wrote this in 2008. I was 14. I think I'm allowed to judge my own work.
If you like it that's fine and I'm happy to make someone else happy, but...
I've improved a lot so looking at my old stuff makes me laugh. If you can't look back at your old work and say "haha wow I've come a long way", clearly you aren't working to improve enough!

So yeah I'm not honestly saying "YOU HAVE TO HATE THIS OMG", I'm just saying that it's so old it makes me laugh, because it's awful compared to the quality of writing I have now. c:

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RatofSpring [2010-09-12 23:41:56 +0000 UTC]

also, I keep mispelling Rundas* I keep relating it to Mundus which is one of my character's names, so that's why I keep putting the 'u' in there

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RatofSpring [2010-09-12 23:40:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for this ;__;

I think you let Samus be pretty badass, and considering she's fighting her ally, I think she acted right.
Plus, he never struck me as a cocky jerk. Gor on the other hand...
Plus, Rundus was totally hitting on her

Pray tell, do you have more Samus/Rundus? :3 I thought I was crazy to pair the two of them but apparently I'm not alone

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Luce-foxeh In reply to RatofSpring [2010-09-13 03:42:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow, people are still reading this? xD I thought I'd deleted it ...

I actually kind of hate the writing quality in this.

But I AM planning on writing more, because I love this pairing. <3

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RatofSpring In reply to Luce-foxeh [2010-09-13 20:40:13 +0000 UTC]



well it is pretty old. You've probably improved a lot

Awesome :3

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astrotoadp5 [2010-04-21 06:57:25 +0000 UTC]

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Luce-foxeh In reply to astrotoadp5 [2010-04-21 22:13:42 +0000 UTC]

?

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astrotoadp5 In reply to Luce-foxeh [2010-04-23 09:05:49 +0000 UTC]

sad.

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Comickiller35 [2009-03-04 14:00:12 +0000 UTC]

ooooh..beautifully done!!

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Niara-Silverbreeze [2009-01-05 07:01:24 +0000 UTC]

The beauty of this fan fic cannot be described with words. It just left me speechless.

I just finished killing Rundas in hyp mode (again) and felt so bad that I turned off the wii. Rundas is a fascinating character and it pained me to see him die :[ You compensate that with this fic.

Great writing skills! Hope you get to continue this some day

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Luce-foxeh In reply to Niara-Silverbreeze [2009-01-06 04:49:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I felt exactly the same way when I killed him (I didn't turn off the Wii, but I had to stop playing for a while to collect myself before I could find a save point THEN turn it off and mope), which is why I started this fic.

I am actually continuing this, in fact I'm almost done with chapter three. Things around my house have been hectic lately, though, so... It should be done by the end of January, though.

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Niara-Silverbreeze In reply to Luce-foxeh [2009-01-06 16:13:43 +0000 UTC]

Aw. Its sweet to kill Dark Samus at least hough, sort of compensates the loss of the three hunters. Well..barely 1 actually, but it still feels good.

Dont wory, I hope that things calm down, looking forward for ch 3

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Luce-foxeh In reply to Niara-Silverbreeze [2009-01-07 02:50:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes. Yes it is, especially after all the junk she makes you go through. Bleh.
Thank you! What with all for the support I'm getting for this fic, it'll probably be out very soon! Positive feedback makes me write faster. :3

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Niara-Silverbreeze In reply to Luce-foxeh [2009-01-07 12:22:26 +0000 UTC]

Of course! I might even draw a pic of Rundas and samus together. I've just managed to perform the rundas glitch and i spent a whole hour drawing him Stupid body contact damage though...he didnt let me get near or else he would, idk how but send me flying! That dude knows how to defend himself even when glitched o_o

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Luce-foxeh In reply to Niara-Silverbreeze [2009-01-09 02:52:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh, sweet!

Wow. That's... awesome. xD Man, I only know the one that gets him stuck in the ceiling. There's one that makes him stay in one place, too?

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Niara-Silverbreeze In reply to Luce-foxeh [2009-01-10 02:04:37 +0000 UTC]

XD

Yeah, ceiling Rundas its tons of fun but he will haunt your game forever...and you too so not a very bright idea. The one which stays in place hummm....if he stays in place in an open area I would love to hear that one. Allows me to see his back and rear Also never got to check out his head when he has the helm on.

Random question...does he has a mouth?

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Luce-foxeh In reply to Niara-Silverbreeze [2009-01-10 22:10:34 +0000 UTC]

You know, I've never really thought of that. Huh.
...I suppose he'd have to, but... Damn. Well, I was going to draw a little sort of 'character sheet' for him anyway, after some glitching and examining of his design. (Screenshots, whoo) So, I guess we'll find out!

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Niara-Silverbreeze In reply to Luce-foxeh [2009-01-15 23:19:03 +0000 UTC]

Huray! I'll try scanning the rundas sketches i did as soon as this stupid machine stops lagging! >

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Luce-foxeh In reply to Niara-Silverbreeze [2009-01-16 02:14:56 +0000 UTC]

AWESOMESAUCE.
Don't lag, you computer, you!

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Niara-Silverbreeze In reply to Luce-foxeh [2009-01-24 03:16:30 +0000 UTC]

IK! btw i managed to scan a drawing i did of good 'ol Rundas
[link]

He was extremely hard to do...and i still havent managed to grasp how he truly looks like. Fail IMO

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Iheartautobots [2008-08-11 17:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Sweet!
*sniff*

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X-Dark-Huntress-X [2008-08-07 04:22:31 +0000 UTC]

This is great. I thought I was the only one who like Samus/Rundas pairing guess not . Keep up the good work .

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Luce-foxeh In reply to X-Dark-Huntress-X [2008-08-07 04:59:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! = D
Yeah, sadly most people don't like the pairing. Pfft. He was totally hitting on her in the game.
-insert rant here-

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darktearsandanime219 [2008-07-29 17:19:14 +0000 UTC]

haha i thought the guys were supposed to cradle the girls? hehe jk nice chapter waiting for more

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Luce-foxeh In reply to darktearsandanime219 [2008-07-29 17:20:16 +0000 UTC]

Heh. Not when said guy just tried to kill himself... Then it tends to happen the other way around. :3

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