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I drew this for because he was telling me what to draw one night when i couldn't sleep. this is one of the things he told me to draw. and i actually loved how it turned out.. so i put more detail into it, enlarged it.. and now i am looking for a bit of critiquing on what i can get fixed.. i will be painting this with acrylics on canvas once i get back into school, so i want to know what i can fix before i do ^^ thank you for any help you give!!

Description
I drew this for because he was telling me what to draw one night when i couldn't sleep. this is one of the things he told me to draw. and i actually loved how it turned out.. so i put more detail into it, enlarged it.. and now i am looking for a bit of critiquing on what i can get fixed.. i will be painting this with acrylics on canvas once i get back into school, so i want to know what i can fix before i do ^^ thank you for any help you give!!