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Published: 2011-10-09 21:13:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 1528; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 3
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Story no longer available due to the story being picked up by a publishing company. This is just a place holder for now. Sorry for the inconvenience. Please read some of my other stories.Related content
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Very intersting story, though kind of sad at the end.
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This is really interesting.
The fact that he's so creepy but he didn't kill the girl.. makes it really interesting.
I thought it was his cousin for a moment, though that wouldn't have been possible.
Great job. And you got a twitter! Welcome to the world of social networking, where Bieber is king. (blah)
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Yeah, with Todd dead I figured his twitter account wont really be used again until there's another sequel. Till then I need to let readers know when new pieces come out. So ta-da.
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Ah smart. But I thought Angela was using Todd's account.
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I understand him perfectly........I love this story so much!
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I think in many cases we are all subjects of our own curiosity. When I was a kid I loved looking around my parents room, the attic, the storage room, trying to find cool things. I was always a nosy kid.
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Whenever I would go into stores, I would always look at the "banned rooms" as they called them.
And sometimes, I would sneak in and see what's there. XD
It was fun!
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ha, i've never seen any banned rooms. san antonio is too conservative.
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oh you live in san antonio?
COOL!
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yeppers. here in TX. where are you from?
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well, I was born in New York, but I live here in Florida!
Hiealeah, FL that is....the poor place.
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cool. I like New York. I love riding subways.
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yeah their really crowded though :I
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Very interesting concept 
And though you said it yourself, I found some stuff you might want to edit/revise:
Everyday he looked her, her body decayed a little bit more. --> Revise? (sounds weird, missing words?)
He pulled away sand at on a wooden stool. --> ???
It was a lot harder then he had imagined. --> than
The property on which he now owned was enormous. --> ???
The man in bonds began to jump and tried to make noise --> a noise
His shadows move through the many crevices. --> moved
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You're awesome. I hope you know that.
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helped with some corrections.
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ha, thanks. I also just released a free ebook today. Please take the time to download it.
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thanks. I haven't seen you in a while. What have you been up to?
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oo ya i got of da for a while i was hurt in side cause of some crap. but better now, i am sick grr there lol and ya long time no talk what about u what ya been up to??
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lol that makes sence u do wright a lot
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ha, thanks. I also just released a free ebook today. Please take the time to download it.
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