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lyingunderfire — Eating Myself Alive
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Published: 2017-11-06 12:35:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 805; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description I have eaten myself alive
Whole
Swallowed my entire body
Soul
I have watched my flailing feet
Fall
Through these lips to undulating
Halls

So here I stare at this living
Cell
With the wall's pressure, its rancid
Smell
Acid pooling around my base
Stings
Slow working, intense, heightening
Ring

Digesting slow I wither and
Fade
Unconscious twitching on my hand
Laid
I sense the movements seize and feel
Numb
So I crush my form beneath my
Thumb

With a small burp I taste faint
Shame
So familiar...
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IcyVoreDragon11 [2022-02-09 05:03:34 +0000 UTC]

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undigniFiend [2017-11-08 23:17:38 +0000 UTC]

I love the rhythm! Makes the very last two words feel like a punchline.
One of my closest friends has major depression, and she has at times described it as feeling like she's being eaten alive. The contrast between the second and third parts remind me of how her anxiety can get intensely painful, and then fall away into utter numbness. Going back to the first point, it's a painful cycle.

Well done! And I'm so glad you like your new job! *high five*

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lyingunderfire In reply to undigniFiend [2017-11-09 04:58:03 +0000 UTC]

Much thanks! 

The majority of what I write here and on my other account is based around depression and self loathing. It took so much for me to muster up the courage to start sharing my works. My intention was to vent through poetry inspired by musical lyrics. I never intended to share any of these works. Over time, however, I decided on sharing a couple of my works. When I found out some people really connected with some of them my fear started to subside. I mean, I know I am not alone with these feelings, but to actually see it is completely different. And as someone who has always felt alone, it is a bit comforting to see it is the opposite: That I am indeed relatable. 

[Although he is still getting over the fear of potentially hampering someone's mood with these works.]

I am a dark, depressing individual and I do not wish to spread this negativity to anyone. 

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