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Hello guys, I did this illustration to my role play games, but I have translate it to English to share with you all...What do you think? Would you play Storytelling with us?!
I would like to thank my friend , who let me use this picture using this mysterus mask!
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Nice. I like it. There are grammar mistakes but its still good. Try this...
There was something on that old route...
Your master divided something into three parts before he died.
What were those, torture devices?
The captain ordered to not investigate any further.
It was painted in blood!
There's more in that house than just insane people.
My friend was captured by strange men.
This dagger will protect those who wield it.
How do I know these things?
I have secrets of my own.
Who am I?
I am the last guardian.
Last to hold the key.
we don't have much time
listen to my words
everything is about to change.
Hope this works better for you.
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Looks interesting. I'm currently in two WoD games: Hunters and Orpheus. I personally love the storyteller system White Wolf has set up.
This looks interesting though there are some spelling/gramar mistakes which is probably due to translation. Which I can point out if it bothers you.
Wish you best of luck in your campaign.
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Hello there. Thank you for your comment.
Well, I would love to. I'm a brazilian, who loves to speak english.
So it would be a pleasure to me.
Please show me everything I want get better...
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Alrighty then, bold = changes words. ()=comments
ACT 1: "Old Religion"
(Unless ATC stands for something like WoD= World of Darkness)
There was something in that old route...
Your master divided it into 3 parts before his death
What were those tortured objects?
The Captain asked not to investigate anymore
(The example is if the captain asked people not to investigate. If the captain was asked not to, it'll goes as follows:
The Captain was asked not to investigate.)
That painting was made with blood
There are more than just insanities in that house
My friend was captured by some strange men
This dagger will protect everyone,but who holds it ?
(if you asking who holds it or has it. If you are trying for who should then it'll be:
This dagger will protect everyone, who should hold it ?)
How do I know all these things?
Well, Let's say that I have my own secrets
('skills' is unnecessary)
Who am I?
I'm the Last Guardian...
The last, who holds
the key
We don't have time
Listen to what I have to say...
It will change everything
PS. another commented made his own suggestions so you can see which you think suits this best.
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Thank you so much! I really appreciate it...
I have changed... I would love to invite you to take a look...
Don't forget to tell me what did u think about it...
Thank u so much!
I love what u have done!
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