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thigi was driving home in the rain late at night
theres a space of my car that i can't ever see out of
i wonder when ill have my next accident
i should start a zine and get my hand out of my pants
well i annoyed her today it seems far from the first time
so i didnt call
maybe tomorrow
the films i like always tell me how to think about the things in them that ive already lived
its extremely helpful
when i bought my bad chinese food i bought a dumb magazine so thats ten more bucks wasted on crap
wm 6' seeks enid from ghost world
i would run to iceland but im far too afraid
of things
but i would never come back
would i be too lonely to enjoy the adventure?
would i shatter?
crazy just means a low tolerance for stress
just cant relate/communicate just retreat and repeat
and hope that forget comes fast enough
if i was hurt would you visit?
if word got to you fast enough?
would i smile?
my funeral was funny
when you started screaming
thats when i realized.
m0f7e
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Comments: 2
jsenn [2001-11-14 01:18:54 +0000 UTC]
Well, here I am following crush again, but I suppose that is okay since he is the one who told me today that you were back and I think he enjoys getting here before I get here and sometimes I don't mind cause I get to read you, strange as you are, and then I get to read megguy and then I get my 2 scents in which just tickles me pink usually except sometimes, like tonight, when I've been sickly for awhile and I want to read these poems out loud and roll on the floor laughing and nobody in the room smiles cause they think i went crazy which just "means a low tolerance for stress". For some reason, even though, Larry understands that is happening he also thinks I have had too much stress and wants to put me to bed which to tell you the truth is okay.... yes .....uh, until i get over all this in a month or so and I will be able to come in here and say OMG you sound normal in this poem, is that possible, exclamation point, exclamation point, winking smilie.
just cant relate/communicate just retreat and repeat
and hope that forget comes fast enough
i know those words, bet megcrusher does too.....so
if i was hurt would you visit?
if word got to you fast enough?
would i smile?
I would smile!
ooooooh
but then you died
didn't see that car in your blind spot?
you've already written your eulogy, haven't you?
It was funny until you recognized the words, huh?
shhhhhhh poor sweet baby
and
you ain't never been rocked enough or rolled just right dot dot dot winking smilie
joy
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meglocrush [2001-11-12 13:37:21 +0000 UTC]
you have no idea how glad i am that youre back. i love your work, this is no exception.
a little more "normal" per se than your other stuff, but i really enjoy it a lot. you have an interesting perspective and unique way of describing moments.
"wm 6' seeks enid from ghost world" is brilliant and the last stanza completely floored me.
:meglocrush: https://meglocrush.deviantart.com
(im not as eem as you think i am)
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