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Published: 2007-05-27 17:18:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 2433; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 6
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Description Beautiful golden circlets
Falling around my pillow
Wrapped between your fingers
Mimic my soft silken legs
Wrapped around your waist

I can only feel the slight
Differences between us
as we melt and become one
Again and once again
My senses heightened, I am you...

A moment in time
where there is nothing
save for you and I
the heat and the passion
the approach of the separation

The world, nay the universe
has trapped itself inside of me
and the building of my implosion
threatens closer, ever closer
as you pull my head back and thrust

My slayer, my tormentor
bringing me sweet absolution
every stroke, every thrust
bringing me closer to heaven
Closer to ending my anguish

And as my back arches awaiting
The final blow to bring me to my peace
My nails dig into your back
My teeth into your shoulder
And it is then I feel the sweet release...
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Comments: 21

corpius12 [2013-03-09 09:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank You ! Wonderful !

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sirfire100 [2009-03-26 21:02:47 +0000 UTC]

I loved that, you are very very good.

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madnimadhatter In reply to sirfire100 [2009-03-27 20:09:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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sirfire100 In reply to madnimadhatter [2009-03-28 18:15:37 +0000 UTC]

your welcome, you do need to write more. Your are a very good writer.

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madnimadhatter In reply to sirfire100 [2009-03-30 21:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. sadly I lack the time currently..but I have been meaning to sit down for a bit a take some time to find myself again.

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sirfire100 In reply to madnimadhatter [2009-03-30 23:45:24 +0000 UTC]

I believe that you have the skill it takes, and I understand I have no time either to do fun stuff...
LMAO D

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madnimadhatter In reply to sirfire100 [2009-04-03 22:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again . Time isn't the only thing escaping me though. Thoughts get lost in my head a lot nowadays. By the time I get pen and paper, it's gone...

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kittenmarie [2008-12-13 00:26:31 +0000 UTC]

haha, i only realized your name was mandi after i read your poem. heh, ironic. it's really good though

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madnimadhatter In reply to kittenmarie [2009-03-21 19:13:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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gol-d-lox [2007-11-02 13:21:58 +0000 UTC]

you really know your stuff well said i hope there's more to come

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madnimadhatter In reply to gol-d-lox [2007-11-24 01:03:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you much

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SRSmith [2007-08-06 04:32:43 +0000 UTC]

"into you back" should be "into your back"

You go fix that up while I take up smoking and pour myself a drink. Maybe I'll have a nap now as I'm feeling a little spent.

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madnimadhatter In reply to SRSmith [2007-08-07 19:33:32 +0000 UTC]

Mmmm I fixed it...

Smoking and a drink, glad to know it hit you that nicely...


M

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kirbysex [2007-06-24 21:53:52 +0000 UTC]

superb!

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madnimadhatter In reply to kirbysex [2007-06-25 18:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you It was lol

M.

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totalyawsome [2007-06-07 23:12:42 +0000 UTC]

damn...very good imagery...i like

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madnimadhatter In reply to totalyawsome [2007-06-11 03:05:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

M.

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BingoLittle [2007-05-28 01:36:33 +0000 UTC]

love!

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madnimadhatter In reply to BingoLittle [2007-05-29 02:44:36 +0000 UTC]

So very glad you loved it

M.

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Riyllan [2007-05-27 17:28:57 +0000 UTC]

Mandi ... yes I love it ..

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madnimadhatter In reply to Riyllan [2007-05-27 21:14:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you loved it
M.

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