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One day in Canterlot, Rayo is heading to Blackshift's house. Rayo knocking on the door. There's no awnser. He's knocking harder and somebody responding.Blackshift: Okay, okay I'm coming, don't beat the door!
Blackshift opened the door.
Blackshift: Why hello there Rayo! Looking for something, or somepony?
Rayo: Actually I looking for you. I just want to talk with you.
Blackshift: Then come in.
Rayo entered Blackshift's house, and his sit down on a chair.
Blackshift: Can I bring you some food or thing?
Rayo: No thanks. So how are you?
Blackshift: Oh I'm good. I just still writing stories and books, you know. And how are you?
Rayo: I'm good too. I have to capture some victims, but not now. I have finally some breaktime, so we can hang out.
Blackshift: Yeah, everypony needs some breaktime. And how are the thing are going with Mrs. Cake?
Rayo: Very good. She's really lovely, but I hope Trixie will doesn't find out I'm flirting with her.
Blackshift: Don't be affraid she will never find out, believe me. I coming back soon okay? Just going into the kitchen. Feel yourself at home.
Rayo: Thanks Blackshift.
When Blackshift headed to the kitchen, Rayo is looking around in the living-room.
Rayo: You have a beautiful house!
Blackshift: Thanks a lot!
The living-room is big with some tables and chairs, and a big shelf with a lot of books. Rayo wondered that what kind of books have Blackshift, so with his magic, taked out some books from the shelf and opened them. The books are about romance stories, between mares, stallions and a mare and a stallion. Some books are contained romance, and some books are contained sex. Rayo just looked the pages, he doesn't find any interesting thing, but when Rayo opened the last book, that was suprised him. That book is contained Rayo and Blackshift. He's turned the pages, and he's really suprised when the book was there at the kissing scene. He turned the page anxiously, cause he doesn't know what going next. The next pages totally shocked Rayo, cause that pages are contained erotic scenes. Rayo blushed deeply when he's reading the book.
Rayo's mind: What the? When did he wrote this? This is ridiciulos! I can't believe that, my friend is writing a disgusting story about us!
Blackshift returned from the kitchen to continue the talk.
Blackshift: Sorry, I just didn't find the cupcake and hey, what do you read?
Rayo: What? Oh n-nothing I just reading some of your book! You're really good at romantic stories, hehe!
Blackshift: What's wrong? Why do you blushing?
Rayo: Nothing, just I-I don't blushing, why d-do you ask it?
Blackshift: Cause your face is red! Did you...did you find that book?
Rayo: Well...I don't w-wanna say, b-but yes.
Blackshift: Rayo, that book is NOT for you! I didn't want to show you, and you just read it?
Rayo: And then why don't you hide it?
Blackshift: Well...I don't know.
Rayo: Anyway I have to go. I wanted to stay, but know I just don't want to meet you.
Rayo opened the entry door and wanted to leave, but Blackshift just closed it. He's headed to Rayo who's trying to retreating.
Rayo: What do you want? Don't go any closer!
Blackshift: Because? Sorry Rayo I'm really sorry.
Rayo: What did you sorry?
Blackshift: I'm sorry that you decided to leave me. I'm dissaponted at you. And now, I have to teach you one lesson.
Rayo: W-what's t-that?
Blackshift: Don't.Mess.With.Me.
And then Blackshift forced to Rayo and laid him on his back, and kissed him. Rayo was shocked when he do it, Blackshift sticked his tongue in Rayo's mouth. Rayo let out some moaning, And Blackshift is licked and kissed Rayo's neck, and continued at his stomach.
Rayo: Stop! D-don't do t-that!
Blackshift didn't stop he's keep pleasured Rayo. He's let out loudly moans.
Blackshift: And now, here's the last step sweetheart!
Rayo: No! D-don't d-dare to do i-it! I warned y-you!
Blackshift without thinking, penetrated him.
Rayo: Ahhhhhhhhhh! T-thats h-hurt!
Blackshift: Don't worry, first I doing it slowly.
Blackshift moved slowly in Rayo. That was painful for him, and but actually he's enjoyed it. Some slowly pushes later, Blackshift is started to push harder and faster. Rayo enjoyed it, but he was felt more pain then before.
Rayo: Ahhhhh! Don't stop! I c-command y-you to c-continue!
Blackshift: Heh, this isn't really bad, doesn't it? Don't worry, you will be feel yourself in heaven, after I camed!
Rayo: J-just do it!!
Blackshift pushed harder and faster. They enjoyed mainly Rayo. Loudly shouts and moans was possible to hear.
Blackshift: Louder! Louder my little slave! Louder!
Rayo: O-okay master! Ahhhhh, I cuming, I cuming!
Blackshift: Me too! Ahhhhhhh!
With a shout, Rayo and Blackshift cumed. Their body was in a spasm.
Blackshift: Did you enjoyed it, Rayo?
Rayo:*pant Yes, yes I*pant*did.
Blackshift kissed on lips Rayo, and they sticked their tongue into each others mouth. They both moaned. After they broke the kiss Rayo said.
Rayo: But we have to keep this as a secret. Don't mention to anypony that.
Blackshift: I will never sweetheart. Never.
Rayo and Blackshift cleaned up the floor and Blackshift is said farewell to Rayo.
Blackshift: We'll meeting later Rayo, Goodbye! I hope we will do it some times.
Rayo: Goodbye Blackshift! But next time I will be the leader. Don't forget it, hehehe!
The end
Comments: 18
KadiKawiiChaniex3 [2011-09-25 13:19:21 +0000 UTC]
MY RESPONCE
-jizz-
srsly
I HATE YOAI but THIS was smexy...for ponies
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mannner In reply to KadiKawiiChaniex3 [2011-09-25 13:30:18 +0000 UTC]
I never see that a female hate yaoi.XD Anyway thanks for the fave.
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KadiKawiiChaniex3 In reply to mannner [2011-09-25 20:04:48 +0000 UTC]
ROFL, really? xD Same >> xDD We are VERY VERY VERRYY rare!! Endangered maybe >>
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Rayodragon [2011-09-04 10:44:43 +0000 UTC]
I'm coming for you Blackshift! I'm going to turn you to glue when I'm thought with you! no one penetrate My Rayo but me with my Strap-on. You better not fill him with your disgusting seed on him!
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mannner In reply to Rayodragon [2011-09-04 10:49:09 +0000 UTC]
Blackshift: H-how do you know about it? I'm so sorry, don't turn me to glue please!
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Rayodragon In reply to mannner [2011-09-04 10:55:29 +0000 UTC]
Begging me won't help! I'm Coming for you!
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mannner In reply to Rayodragon [2011-09-04 10:57:38 +0000 UTC]
Blackshift: I'm doomed! Just one question: How do know about that?
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mannner In reply to Rayodragon [2011-09-04 11:04:57 +0000 UTC]
Blackshift: Oh f**k, I'm so stupid!
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Buttersc0tchSundae [2011-09-04 06:45:33 +0000 UTC]
It was a bit impolite for Blackshift to penetrate Rayo so soon, but I'm glad he enjoyed himself.
Nice story, mannner! I quite enjoy yaoi - I think I might try writing a story myself.
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Rayodragon In reply to Buttersc0tchSundae [2011-09-04 08:04:03 +0000 UTC]
0.o you like it!? I felt weird having colt on colt action
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Rayodragon [2011-09-04 01:12:01 +0000 UTC]
0///0 oh my..... Now I want to draw a colts on colts with trixie action.
Great story it made my Rayo go both ways!
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PatRoison [2011-09-03 23:19:10 +0000 UTC]
Yaoi, that's the word. This was interesting to read, and a good reference cause I'm kind of stuck on a CaraMac fic right now. I liked it.
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mannner In reply to REDNETTHALL [2011-09-03 22:24:08 +0000 UTC]
If you don't like yaoi(I like a little bit)then that's not your story.
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