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MasterSavior — Sailor Moon ET - Chapter 13 Revised

Published: 2012-04-22 23:05:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 442; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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Description Finally, good gravy, Chapter 13 is up.


Sorry to keep everyone waiting. Work, a convention and being massively sick was just enough to keep me from this chapter, but I finally have it done. So, recap time? Recap time.

Nix and Hydra, former handmaidens have been waiting for Charon to make for his beloved Guardian. In chapter twelve, we discovered our heroines to be slightly out-classed by these beauties. But as many of you have already guessed, Pluto is going to be doing some saving.

But what new thing do I have now? Where am I taking you next? The Door of Time and Space is lost, under control of Jadeite and by proxy, Chaos itself. In the prologue Artemis explained about a conflict he called the 'War of Tomorrows.' The set up for this even begins now.

Comments, thoughts? Let me know! PDF format, so use the 'Download' feature if it doesn't show up for you. Now off to get Chapter 14 started...
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Comments: 4

Tux-boi [2012-05-12 18:12:18 +0000 UTC]

Dang!!! Can we say major awesome! Great job!

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MasterSavior In reply to Tux-boi [2012-05-12 23:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank You

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scooby82101 [2012-04-29 17:17:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow...I was not expecting Norse Mythology being entwined into this. It was very clever and ingenius. I like how Setsuna talked about time; how there are some events that cannot be changed. How they come to be varies, but cannot be changed. Very well done. Aside from some word mix ups, it was very well done. I'm really just speechless. Well done~

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MasterSavior In reply to scooby82101 [2012-04-30 22:53:07 +0000 UTC]

I really thought of it as a fun twist. It helped tie the two Kingdoms of Terra Firma and the Moon with a myth bridge that could easily be believed. I wanted to give a way point to the reader so they had something of the story that could be related too, factually. I really enjoyed working this into the story.

I am glad you are having fun with it. I appreciate your input.

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