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MasterSavior — Sailor Moon ET - Chapter 4 Revised
Published: 2011-12-22 07:42:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 554; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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Chapter four is here.It's a bit bigger than the others, but there is so much stuff going on. Here we learn a bit more about the Order, something that doesn't make Usagi happy.
Oh, and that bad guy? Yeah, still mysterious.
Party at Rei's shrine. Seems Setsuna explains a little something that never really...was explained in the manga or anime. Not to my knowledge, anyway. Also, added a skit with Minako and Setsuna, adding to the budding friendship as seen in Sailor Stars.
Charon's left eye, the one with no color? What a funny little thing that does. You all have fun with that.
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Very nice flow and great dialogue. It's been ages since I've seen the show, but the dialogue reminded me of all their personalities; it fit them so well.
I enjoyed reading this, I couldn't stop. All the interactions were great. Your ideas for how Sailor Pluto can be in one place and yet is a guardian of time is creative and believable. And the order, I can actually see it being real. Prince Mamoru (Right? 
As for the villain...very interesting. I was watching a show, and the 'villain's' voice was the one I heard; fits I think. Again, awesome dialogue.
Charon's left eye...damn. I knew it was special, but that was beyond my expectation and the detail really was amazing.
Some spelling mistakes or missing words, but it didn't take away from the story. You're doing a great job with your rewrite. ^^ Making me feel so much for the characters.
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Thank you, I am really glad you are enjoying yourself with the reading. I've flagged this chapter in my notes as a critical for the final go-through to amend those errors.
There is more to his eye, stay with me and you'll see. We are going to go much deeper. ^_^
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I always liked your explanation of how Pluto could be guarding the gate and helping the sailor senshi at the same time. The faux copy really clears up that confusing business of "wait, if she's here... who's guarding the door that's supposed to never ever be unattended?" XD
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I thought the concept was pretty clever. It needed explanation, with Pluto taking the initial focus of the story. 
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