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MasterSavior — Sailor Moon ET - Chapter 5 Revised
Published: 2011-12-25 23:25:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 377; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Chapter five is up.Here we finally get to see what's this bad guy is up too, and oh - won't you be surprised! But it's not peaches...there are things going down that don't make for a typical 'monster of the day' like we are used to. Like a movie, this story has a lot of meat on its bones, plots and events that are moving toward a singular goal: getting us to Crystal Tokyo. Drama? It begins now...
Charon, our newly introduced character...it's time to see what he can do.
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When I saw Jadeite in here, I squeed for a bit - until I read this and learn he's a villain. BWAAA!
It was too much to hope for SenshixShitennou - Pluto and Charon are the focus here and everything else is just...there.
Oh well. I'm liking this, it's wonderfully dark and puts the Senshi up against an adversary they clearly can't beat alone. Looking forward to seeing what Charon can do and if Pluto will remember him.
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About damn time someone interrupted her speech. It grew old after the first few episodes.
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Damn...I'm seriously loving this. All the details are amazing and there is so much action. To bring back an old character is a well played idea though a new foe is behind it leaves us to wonder what is going on.
As for the monster...great description. Simply disturbing. I was shocked that Sailor Moon's love was attacked so brutally as were the others. And the scene of the policeman being severed in half. Brutal. I love it!
Charon...ready to kick some ass. Shit just got real.
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Action and suspense is the name of the game. I purposely held off the revelation of who the villain really was to build it up. I felt it was a surprise to see a foe from the very beginning return, added some flavor to it.
The creature is my 'something new', balanced with the something old. In a world that's canon, I wanted to let the reader know I was going to alter their world but ensured that something remained for them to relate it too - this is why Jadeite was my choice. It balanced the wow with the woah.
<3 Charon.
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Yay! Now we've gotten to the action!
For some reason I really like that Sailor Moon gets cut off in the middle of her trademark "love and justice" spiel. It's kind of a "shit just got real" moment. XD
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Yes, I totally agree. It's go time, hard mode.
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