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Chapter eight is now live. On this one, there were several major edits as opposed to the rough.

One, there were several characters that had conversations with Charon, namely Artemis and Hotaru. Artemis had some inquiries into the knight's past, but this element was axed so that I could better deploy a surprise instead.

Hotaru was going to confess using Charon and Setsuna to free herself from the grasp of Chaos (who in the manga went berserk and finished off the Moon Kingdom survivors, I believe.) Both Charon and Setsuna will come to learn of the truth about it, so I felt the redundancy of Hotaru's conversation was now moot.

Oh, but what did I add? A tasty scene with Haruka. I promised I would show you a different side to her, just a touch and still in character. What do they say to each other? It's fun, and emotional and it was a delight to write. You'll see. The end result pleases me greatly, and it provides a better ground of acceptance for Charon. Haruka is the last one he needs to win over. Mission accomplished.

The second half is another quip about the mystery of Charon. This time, it's on Setsuna's side of the story, and she gets to see something that confirms those emotions she feels.

Oh, and some sex. Just a hint, nothing vulgar. You'll love it. Promise.

Download, as it is in PDF format. Please comment below thoughts and feelings regarding this chapter.

Description
Chapter eight is now live. On this one, there were several major edits as opposed to the rough.

One, there were several characters that had conversations with Charon, namely Artemis and Hotaru. Artemis had some inquiries into the knight's past, but this element was axed so that I could better deploy a surprise instead.

Hotaru was going to confess using Charon and Setsuna to free herself from the grasp of Chaos (who in the manga went berserk and finished off the Moon Kingdom survivors, I believe.) Both Charon and Setsuna will come to learn of the truth about it, so I felt the redundancy of Hotaru's conversation was now moot.

Oh, but what did I add? A tasty scene with Haruka. I promised I would show you a different side to her, just a touch and still in character. What do they say to each other? It's fun, and emotional and it was a delight to write. You'll see. The end result pleases me greatly, and it provides a better ground of acceptance for Charon. Haruka is the last one he needs to win over. Mission accomplished.

The second half is another quip about the mystery of Charon. This time, it's on Setsuna's side of the story, and she gets to see something that confirms those emotions she feels.

Oh, and some sex. Just a hint, nothing vulgar. You'll love it. Promise.

Download, as it is in PDF format. Please comment below thoughts and feelings regarding this chapter.