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Published: 2010-09-29 23:04:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 195; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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We went to the library. I got two books. You dropped one as we left.Little boy says,
"This is the funnest library ever!"
Mothers don't smile at me anymore when I say how cute their kids are.
Is it the hair or the cigarette in my hand?
You essentially called me a slut
and said you regretted losing it to me.
I've been called worse.
I was just biting my nails out of habit.
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I don't know if bitterness is bad in a poem. Sometimes truth is bitter.
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Love the first stanza and the last line. The rest of the second stanza just comes off as bitter.
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