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Published: 2011-06-24 02:32:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 221; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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He held her tightly, his body providing warmth in the pouring night rain. His tears were obscured, mixed with the rain. Thunder drummed nearby, occasionally destroying the near perfect silence. Only the blazing fire in the distance and the sharp light of the moon lit up the two of them. Her makeup had run down her cheeks, his glasses were cracked and both of their clothes had been all but shredded. No words could ever convey the feelings they felt for one another at this point for without the other, neither would be standing alive at that moment. Lightning shot across the sky, illuminating even the darkest corner of the muddy forest. He clenched his teeth in anger, fear and sadness, for now everything he had was lost, all but that which was right in front of him, she was now all he had left to fight for and fight for her he would, to his dying breath he swore to protect her. Again the lightning lit up the black sky. She caught a glimpse of herself in a nearby puddle, her face blackened from the fire, her hair singed and her clothes charred. She opened her mouth to speak but words failed her, so instead she gripped him even tighter as too her tears mixed with the cascading sky.He took a moment, holding her slightly away from him, looking deep into her eyes. She stared back, her soft gaze in contrast to their surroundings. He moved gently towards her, stealing one moment from this hell, the moment their lips met, their problems, for a moment, became insignificant, nothing in the world mattered but them, nothing but that one moment, the moment two became one, the final moment in which they could believe that a life together was possible, that through all the adversity they would see it through. The thunder masked the gun crack, a single bullet flew through the air towards the happy pair. Together, forever.
Comments: 13
lollolbe [2011-06-24 04:56:58 +0000 UTC]
wow! your such a great writer! i would love to write a romantic story....but they all turn out dark....and people get killed o.e sigh....how do you do it!?
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maxaxe In reply to lollolbe [2011-06-24 11:10:52 +0000 UTC]
^/////^ thank you very much . Haha I think mine are fairly dark as well... but its how you write so you should embrace it
haha and in all fairness, one of em gets killed in this one >.< haha but i'm sooooo happy you like it
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lollolbe In reply to maxaxe [2011-06-24 23:40:04 +0000 UTC]
welcome! ^.^ mine are really dark....cause theres rape and murder and mutants and and more rape....i dont even know why i do rape ones! XD but i might try to write one like yours...any tips? XD
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maxaxe In reply to lollolbe [2011-06-25 22:01:32 +0000 UTC]
Sadness is good in writing if done right... i cant get it right :/ but maybe you do . Two tips 1) Always write what you want
2) [link] listen to that song... it gives me inspiration maybe it will you too
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lollolbe In reply to maxaxe [2011-06-26 02:51:37 +0000 UTC]
i dont like writing sad all the time though...it makes my friends cry...and thanks for the tips~ (i shall listen to the song once i gone my homework)
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maxaxe In reply to lollolbe [2011-06-27 15:04:32 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm well i really hope you manage to do what you want I hope you do, tis very good
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lollolbe In reply to maxaxe [2011-06-27 23:32:19 +0000 UTC]
thanks~ maybe i need more love songs XD they always seem good help
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maxaxe In reply to lollolbe [2011-06-28 14:49:03 +0000 UTC]
Love songs are good
I can't wait to read what you come up with
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lollolbe In reply to maxaxe [2011-06-29 08:55:05 +0000 UTC]
first up i need a plot XD so that will take a while....sigh
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maxaxe In reply to lollolbe [2011-06-29 11:47:44 +0000 UTC]
Haha do you not have inspiration mechanisms?
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lollolbe In reply to maxaxe [2011-06-29 11:48:46 +0000 UTC]
no not really....unless i listen to a good song ooooor....do something epic
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maxaxe In reply to lollolbe [2011-06-29 11:52:03 +0000 UTC]
thats what i do haha. Hmmmm what do u usually write about like futuristic things, current things, fantasy?
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