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Maxe — Alone
Published: 2005-12-17 21:40:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 198; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 12
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Description What is this life
What is the purpose
I feel so alone
And I feel so hopeless

No one was there
Why should I care
Left and forgotten
And feeling forsaken

What is this madness
The fury inside
I feel like running
Away just to hide

I cry in the night
The silence unbroken
I no longer wish to
Leave this pain unspoken

Why am I here
In this place full of hate
It eats me alive
As I try to escape

Gnawing and biting
Tearing and chewing
As it leaves me
Spitting and spewing

Why is it like this
These things that I feel
The wounds inside me
Will they ever heal

I sit and I stare
At this world all around me
Seeming so cheery
Yet leaving me weary

Will I ever forget
Maybe not ever,
Or at least not yet
Meanwhile, sitting and leaking

Traces of this mess
All over the place
Somedays it is hard
To look me in the face

Why do I bother
To trudge ever onward
When I've been abandoned
to be loved nevermore
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Comments: 4

Xanedon [2005-12-18 00:53:36 +0000 UTC]

I love it. This one is great! Just remember that you will never be abandoned as long as I have anything to say or do about it.

(most definitly a weary for that one)

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Maxe In reply to Xanedon [2005-12-19 19:46:03 +0000 UTC]

Yay. he luffs et. See, I even did a good job and traded abandoned for left, see, me get better. Hopesa talk to you soon..no particular reason, just a'cuz I cans.

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XcrimsonangelX [2005-12-17 21:57:12 +0000 UTC]

I love it. Very well written. Good job.

And, just for the heck of it, I think weary would fit better.

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Maxe In reply to XcrimsonangelX [2005-12-19 19:43:18 +0000 UTC]

I think it kind of goes with the rhyme of it better, too.

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