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Published: 2005-10-20 21:44:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 77; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description This is where lies Rachel M.
Hear now how her story did end
Stayed awake one night too late
Hearing something at the gate
She went outside, but nothing saw
So she let out one big yawn
'Tis nothing there at all, she thought
Then through the dark out rang a shot
She would have lived to be old
If she'd obeyed what was told
If she just had stayed in her bed
Precisely as her mother'd said
This is where lies Rachel M.
Now you've heard her story's end
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Comments: 9

carsqn [2005-10-29 16:12:46 +0000 UTC]

thats a funky class lesson, wish I'd had that in class
nice poem

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Maxe In reply to carsqn [2005-10-30 00:14:05 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Spooky-Gummy-Penguin [2005-10-21 11:17:57 +0000 UTC]

Yay for morbid stuff!

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Xanedon [2005-10-21 03:04:15 +0000 UTC]

you're getting better fast

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Maxe In reply to Xanedon [2005-10-21 20:50:58 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh..do you mean like how every set of lines has the same syllables?

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Xanedon In reply to Maxe [2005-10-23 18:15:53 +0000 UTC]

same all kinds of stuff.............your stuff is getting better, i don;t know how it just sounds really good

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Maxe In reply to Xanedon [2005-10-21 20:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Better how?

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XcrimsonangelX [2005-10-21 00:06:39 +0000 UTC]

Morbid indeed. Very interesting. I've never seen anything like that done before. Tis neat. Very good job with it. ^.^

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Maxe In reply to XcrimsonangelX [2005-10-21 00:08:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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