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Published: 2010-04-18 18:05:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 656; Favourites: 30; Downloads: 15
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Description c: Art trade with of her character, Ecota~

Um, well, I tried out a new pose. |D Tried to bring out the whole flying aspect of the picture. c: I just randomly thought of shooting stars, so I drew a sort of space-ish background. I used this for reference: [Link]

Um, yeah, hope you like it~ c:
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Jigsaw-x [2010-05-02 19:19:52 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Please forgive me;; this is only my second critique!

When I first saw this image, I thought it really resembled an amazing piece of art. One of my favorite parts of it is the color scheme -- who doesn't like red and gray? I personally love it.

For vision, my only thing is that the tail looks a smidge awkward (maybe add more lines where the butt ends and the tail begins) and for depth, add the fourth leg. (Optional) Otherwise, it looks great.

One thing I really like about your art is that you do fur/hair really well. Seriously! It looks amazingly realistic. C:

I adore the shading. The paws look good because the flames look real, like they're actually coming out of the paw. The bracelet looks like part of it isn't on his hand (the right side) but I think you did a really nice job of it anyways.

Oh, and I forgot. The back leg's paw should have more 'paw' detail. Like, darker lines to show where the claws are.

The background is amazing. The design is very, very, amazing. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="17" height="16" alt="" title="Star!"/>

You've improved a lot! <3

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memory--of--flight In reply to Jigsaw-x [2010-05-02 19:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, Blizz! C: *nod* I definitely need to work on more anatomy and such, and you've inspired me to go sketch up some stuff. C:

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Jigsaw-x In reply to memory--of--flight [2010-05-02 19:55:56 +0000 UTC]

xD Aww thanks <3 and no problem! you are very talented ^^

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memory--of--flight In reply to Jigsaw-x [2010-05-02 20:01:31 +0000 UTC]

;w; thank you, that means a lot to me!

But so are you!

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thenightcallers [2010-04-20 08:46:43 +0000 UTC]

omgggg thank you sooo mushh , >:3 I luff it , i promise to do ur part when im no longer grounded D: im on the school comps at the moment , :3 I really cant thank you enough , its amazing , and really describes him well :3 thank you tahnk you thank yoooouu , and anywat stop saying that you are crap , cos ur not , I cant draw like this in 10000 years lol XD hahaahaa , really im really happy thatt you drew this thank you I really love this thank you very much , i haff to goes . byeee

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memory--of--flight In reply to thenightcallers [2010-04-20 19:31:49 +0000 UTC]

No problem, and take as much time as you need! c:

thank you so much! .w. you're so kind! :3

<3 You can certainly draw this in less than a 10000 years! D< You can draw better than this NOW! |D

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thenightcallers In reply to memory--of--flight [2010-04-28 16:47:00 +0000 UTC]

>:C i cant draw better than u , but thank you soo mush i really cant do it at the moment D:

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memory--of--flight In reply to thenightcallers [2010-04-29 01:01:35 +0000 UTC]

<3 Yes you can, I've seen your art. c:
Haha, that's alright!

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Austrandorra [2010-04-18 20:08:08 +0000 UTC]

Great work! ^^ The perspective is really nice and you did an awesome job with the background.

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memory--of--flight In reply to Austrandorra [2010-04-18 20:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Aussie! c: I'm glad the perspective turned out alright. :3

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Austrandorra In reply to memory--of--flight [2010-04-18 21:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Of course!

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purpleANDpinkVIXEN [2010-04-18 19:10:41 +0000 UTC]

THATS AWESOME!!

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memory--of--flight In reply to purpleANDpinkVIXEN [2010-04-18 19:29:15 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU~ ^^

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purpleANDpinkVIXEN In reply to memory--of--flight [2010-04-18 19:31:27 +0000 UTC]

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iSilverX [2010-04-18 18:14:24 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work! Love the texture.

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memory--of--flight In reply to iSilverX [2010-04-18 18:16:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, Silver!
xD I have a tendency to texture rape things, so I'm glad it came out decent. c:

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KwehCat [2010-04-18 18:11:12 +0000 UTC]

That's awesome!

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memory--of--flight In reply to KwehCat [2010-04-18 18:13:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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KwehCat In reply to memory--of--flight [2010-04-18 18:14:01 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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Echoness [2010-04-18 18:07:37 +0000 UTC]

Epic ^^

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memory--of--flight In reply to Echoness [2010-04-18 18:09:40 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you! :3

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Echoness In reply to memory--of--flight [2010-04-18 18:11:36 +0000 UTC]

no prob ^^

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