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These are my two newest characters, Inventor and Invention. They have hijacked my sketchbook since I first thought of them last Tuesday, and they're not letting it go until I finish their story. Luckily it will fit in a 10 page comic, so it shan't take too long... hopefully.I'm feeling a little restless with my happy characters, so I decided to make a pair doomed to tragedy from the start. He (inventor) gets commissioned to make her (Invention), a clockwork girl who can speak, act and think like a human girl. It doesn't quite go to plan when she falls in love with him. Society may think she is an incredible scientific achievement, but they would not like to see her with a human lover. Even more important is whether or not Inventor can come to terms with his feelings towards his own creation.
There's just no way for it to end happily.
Inventor/Invention characters and story © to me, Jem Yoshioka. Steal them and I make you HURT.
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Comments: 19
worldsfire [2007-07-18 06:24:33 +0000 UTC]
I love the picture and the whole idea for the story. It's brilliant.
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Melii [2005-05-04 20:48:40 +0000 UTC]
God this is incredible. I LOVE androids. Robot girls are my true obsession, and she is wearing green, my favourite colour. Great piece. I love the storyline as well.
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greekamazon [2005-04-29 18:05:58 +0000 UTC]
Very cute. The story sounds very touching, I'm looking forward to it.
Love the piece, it looks very meloncholy, and I love the guy's suit. I think your style has been evolving a lot recently, especially in the colouring department. ^^ Looks super cool.
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woefulinfinity [2005-04-24 00:12:45 +0000 UTC]
I dunno if I've alreayd told you how amazing I think this is.
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alienarose [2005-04-18 11:27:23 +0000 UTC]
Such an awesome style and what a neat character concept! I really love her dress and his hair and as always, you always set them in such a neat, stylish backgrounds. Very cool!
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PrincessLicorice [2005-04-14 03:42:32 +0000 UTC]
Nifty idea. It's kinda Tim Burtonish in style. The invention looks very prim and proper, despite seeming to be very haphazardly put together. She has a dangerous glint in her eye too. Like, "Don't touch my man!" Very interesting. Can't wait to see how this develops!
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kendre [2005-04-13 20:15:26 +0000 UTC]
I like your new chara, very original. And the desing of the both of them is really good.
I also like their story and the image shows a lot of emotions.
Gorgeous work, Jem
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moonmystique [2005-04-13 14:45:20 +0000 UTC]
The characters are wicked! I love the designs. The story sounds similar to this japanese anime manga, Chobits. I like your idea better though >.>; I don't like anime...
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Midnight-cat In reply to moonmystique [2005-04-13 23:52:31 +0000 UTC]
I suppose it is a little like Chobits, but it's also similar to quite a few other stories. I'm not claiming the idea to be original, according to post modernism everything's been done anyway. This is just my take on it. Plus, I'm taking a much more tragic ending than Chobits did.
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moonmystique In reply to Midnight-cat [2005-04-14 14:10:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh, okay. I hope I didn't offend you :S I didn't mean anything by it...
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Midnight-cat In reply to moonmystique [2005-04-14 19:36:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh, no, I'm not offended. I've just had several other cases of people likening my story to several other stories already. I've said this a few times and it's become rather abreviated.
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moonmystique In reply to Midnight-cat [2005-04-14 19:43:06 +0000 UTC]
Whoosh! I'm relieved...I tried to give another person a constructive critique (cause it said advanced critique welcome) and then they said that they liked the way it was, and I said sorry, and that was just my opinion and now that person seems annoyed with me and now I'm screwed. Oy, I hope he doesn't bite my head off..I didn't mean it..
..don't mind me..had to get that out of my system..
..just so I'm not going off topic...Great pic! I like her mechanical arm..really cool!
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Midnight-cat In reply to moonmystique [2005-04-14 21:24:22 +0000 UTC]
Yes, the internet is tricky like that, since it takes all tone of voice away.
And thankyou! I'm really quite insecure about my mechanical designs, so I'm pleased that you like it. ^^
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moonmystique In reply to Midnight-cat [2005-04-15 20:01:59 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it's really cool, looks almost skelital.
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maina [2005-04-13 13:51:53 +0000 UTC]
WOW! Simply wow............ Love the colors, LOVE the emotion. + fav!
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songspinner [2005-04-13 12:04:06 +0000 UTC]
It's daaaaaaahhhling, darling!
I do love the colour scheme. Can't wait to see where you go with them.
You better not forget to make this a print for your thingy this weekend
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CarinaT [2005-04-13 08:45:49 +0000 UTC]
Brilliant artwork...and I'm really really interested in the story. I gotta read the comic when you finish.
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