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HumanName: Max Sherman
Appearance: Very pale skin. He wears black T-shirt, and black jeans with a black leather belt. Belt has a heavy metal buckle. The buckle is shaped like a hypnosis vortex. Each day, the T-Shirt has a different graphic on it. Wears black leather gauntlets.
Hometown: New York City
Gender: Male
Age: 18
Personality: Cold, calculating, efficient, brutal, loyal, courageous, chivalrous. He loves to play video games.
Important possessions: Gauntlets, a pair of red six sided dice, and the leather belt.
Family: Only child. Father and Mother are still alive. Father's name is Igor, Mother's name is Olga.
Mobian Form
Name: Wraith
Species: Red-tail hawk.
Appearance: Black feathers tipped with red. He wears full body black leather armor like outfit with red, sinister looking runic symbols all over.
Powers: Silent movement. Hypnosis. Aura of fear. NeuroToxin Fog of Madness that blocks all sensory input, and creates an illusionary world of pain, despair, and fear in the target's mind. As long as the neurotoxins are active in the target's blood stream, the target is stuck seeing their worst fears come to life before their very eyes. The pain, torture, and agony might be all in their head, but it FEELS very real to the target. The Fog of Madness is non-lethal unless the target dies of heart failure. He can also manipulate the kinetic energy of anything in direct contact with him, like his whip, which allow his melee attacks to much more precise, deadly, and unpredictable than expected. Also has the power to do a kinetic energy version of a chaos blast attack. It is called Kinetic Burst.
Weapons: Chain Whip + 2 Customized Control Pistols.
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Comments: 47
Millenium110 In reply to BelRhaza4017 [2011-11-03 04:47:58 +0000 UTC]
Double post? And thanks. What do you find most interesting about him?
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BelRhaza4017 In reply to Millenium110 [2011-11-03 22:22:46 +0000 UTC]
many people I meet call it the warrior's rage, a powerful focusing of one's hate of the enemy and aiming it right at them; it usually ends up w/ the bad guys being quite dead
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Millenium110 In reply to BelRhaza4017 [2011-11-04 03:17:36 +0000 UTC]
Yea... especially when the warrior in question is dual-weilding antimatter edged claws that shoot out on chains. Antimatter hurricane anyone?
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BelRhaza4017 In reply to Millenium110 [2011-11-04 04:33:18 +0000 UTC]
yeouch; I'd say that's gonna leave a mark, but w/ annihilations galore, there ain't gonna be nothing left
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Millenium110 In reply to BelRhaza4017 [2011-11-04 05:36:47 +0000 UTC]
Well, maybe a few shreds of bloody flesh here and there. And ash. Lots and lots of ash.
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BelRhaza4017 In reply to Millenium110 [2011-11-04 21:08:33 +0000 UTC]
cough, cough... no kidding
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Millenium110 [2011-03-28 13:54:33 +0000 UTC]
Update #3: I put in the Kinetic Energy manipulation.
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Millenium110 [2011-03-28 13:51:31 +0000 UTC]
Update #2: I put in the details for the Fog of Madness.
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Millenium110 [2011-02-05 05:41:06 +0000 UTC]
Update: Wraith is probably getting a pair of high power pistols and a barbed chaos chain whip.
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AshezTheKitty19 [2011-02-01 03:10:12 +0000 UTC]
Kick ass!
I don't think you're cold though... =[
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Millenium110 In reply to AshezTheKitty19 [2011-02-01 03:12:28 +0000 UTC]
You'd be surprised... I was one cold hearted asshole before I met you guys. I kinda thawed out. My life was a cold, dark place before I went to High School.
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AshezTheKitty19 In reply to Millenium110 [2011-02-03 03:26:25 +0000 UTC]
I can understand... even though I didn`t show it, I felt like that within... in a way >< I hate Lucy-like thoughts.. But then I met my online friends and you guys in sophomore year..
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Millenium110 In reply to AshezTheKitty19 [2011-02-03 03:38:30 +0000 UTC]
Uh huh... You still don't get it. Lucy (from elfen lied right?) was a pushover compared to me. I would psycologically rip people apart when they messed with me. I looked them in the eye, and told them their worst fears in life were true. I'm not proud of what I used to do, but I can deal with the past. I left it behind at the same time you did. It still flares up occasionally, but I got it under wraps. And now I get to vent it through Wraith.
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AshezTheKitty19 In reply to Millenium110 [2011-02-04 03:14:04 +0000 UTC]
No, I get it... I figured that.. (Yeah, from Elfen Lied)
I`m just saying that I, well...sort of had thoughts like her...
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Millenium110 In reply to AshezTheKitty19 [2011-02-04 03:17:42 +0000 UTC]
I honestly don't rememer who she was...
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AshezTheKitty19 In reply to Millenium110 [2011-02-04 03:23:48 +0000 UTC]
She was bullied by her peers back when she was a child and she grew hatred for humans so she just killed them
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Millenium110 In reply to AshezTheKitty19 [2011-02-04 03:25:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh right... Well. Bullying is a part of life. Everyone comes in contact with it in one form or another. It is completely natural to hate your oppressors. Killing them might be a bit extreme ^.^'
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AshezTheKitty19 In reply to Millenium110 [2011-02-04 03:49:09 +0000 UTC]
Yeah ... But I heard that alot of bullied kids committed suicide because of extreme bullying and such... So they should put up some laws for anti-bullying soon..
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Millenium110 In reply to AshezTheKitty19 [2011-02-04 03:50:53 +0000 UTC]
They are trying. The dark side of my personality is looking mighty fine right now. I feel it clawing its way up the back of my throat. Not the way I thought it would be. I thought if I ever went back, it would be for a good reason. Not this.
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AshezTheKitty19 In reply to Millenium110 [2011-02-04 03:54:55 +0000 UTC]
I wonder what the hell happened though... but maybe you should go and make up with Nicky..
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SassCannon [2011-01-31 23:27:23 +0000 UTC]
Agreed with Drew. There were few dark characters, but I think you take the cake for.. well, most. Not including , he takes like... EVERYTHING. Haha.
Anyway, great profile!
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Millenium110 In reply to SassCannon [2011-01-31 23:28:13 +0000 UTC]
The kicker is he is one of the good guys ^.^
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Millenium110 In reply to SassCannon [2011-01-31 23:59:44 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Welcome to the dark side of the good side! We have hypnosis cookies!
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SassCannon In reply to Millenium110 [2011-02-01 00:01:08 +0000 UTC]
YAY! *noms on a cookie then gets hypnotized, walking around like a zombie*
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lasttofollowwar In reply to Millenium110 [2011-01-31 23:34:48 +0000 UTC]
indeed.....good....right.....( what, good guys can still eat people....right?)
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Millenium110 In reply to ShadowAmyfan [2011-01-31 23:26:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^.^ Drew said he wanted a character that mindfucks people, so there you have it.
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Scion-the-Hedgehog [2011-01-31 23:17:58 +0000 UTC]
Hmm.... impressive, I didnt expect anything like this... but I like it. I do need a few more darker characters... by mindfuck, I was more speaking of ones with abilities that're hell to analyze, but this works rather well... the one issue I'll say is that for your ability to work, the chaos energy you expel must be greater than the defensive energies radiated by your foe.
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Millenium110 In reply to Scion-the-Hedgehog [2011-01-31 23:22:44 +0000 UTC]
Any way to fit in an ability to drain chaos energy from enemies? So that he can fuel his powers with the pain and misery of his foes?
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Scion-the-Hedgehog In reply to Millenium110 [2011-01-31 23:51:45 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... only once they've become hypnotized can you drain it, and the drain is dependent on the extent of the hypnotism.
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Millenium110 In reply to Scion-the-Hedgehog [2011-01-31 23:53:20 +0000 UTC]
Sure. What ever you say. I was thinking that he could drain them when he fights them hand to hand. You know, when he himself runs out of energy.
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Scion-the-Hedgehog In reply to Millenium110 [2011-02-01 00:03:53 +0000 UTC]
Nah, that's too simple.
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lasttofollowwar In reply to Scion-the-Hedgehog [2011-02-01 00:13:40 +0000 UTC]
tho, if he was fighting in a mentul relm it wuold be a difrnt story
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Scion-the-Hedgehog In reply to lasttofollowwar [2011-02-01 00:19:44 +0000 UTC]
True.. he'd suddenly have an advantage.
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lasttofollowwar In reply to Scion-the-Hedgehog [2011-02-01 00:22:06 +0000 UTC]
in that case i think he cuold do it, as hand to hand combat would be = to mentul conact
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Scion-the-Hedgehog In reply to lasttofollowwar [2011-02-01 01:38:53 +0000 UTC]
Hmm... fair enough.
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Millenium110 In reply to Scion-the-Hedgehog [2011-02-01 00:11:26 +0000 UTC]
Fine, you're the boss.
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lasttofollowwar In reply to Millenium110 [2011-01-31 23:31:58 +0000 UTC]
i like the concept, tho it can't be to powerful, as we must keep caricters power levels balanced, may be that can be a power you develop later?
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lasttofollowwar In reply to Scion-the-Hedgehog [2011-01-31 23:22:28 +0000 UTC]
or, the more powerful the mind, the more energy it takes to manipulate it,
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Scion-the-Hedgehog In reply to lasttofollowwar [2011-01-31 23:51:02 +0000 UTC]
That too. Both chaos energy and mental capacity would be factors.
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lasttofollowwar In reply to Scion-the-Hedgehog [2011-02-01 00:20:16 +0000 UTC]
yes we can work the detals out, but i think this is a win, yes?
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