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MilleniumFallcon — Forget Me Not
Published: 2008-12-07 04:37:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 825; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 7
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    Forget me not, lest you be forgotten. The words replay in my mind, a mantra, a delicate cadence that I cling to. It is so breathtakingly beautiful, and yet so bitter. Pour upon me your vengeance, your self-conceit, and your rage. I will gratefully endure it, lather it upon myself, and lap up the remnants so that none are wasted. It means nothing so long as you look upon me and see something more than a stranger.

    Forget me not. Do not let these words become my poison, my death. Do not let me lie alone night after embittered night. I wish only to listen to the beats of your heart, not the silence. I wish only to feel the warmth of you beside me, not this chill that slowly finds its way to my bones. Is there no comfort left to be found in my bosom? Have I merely been cheapened to such a state of vulgarity that you find not the slightest merit?

    Forget me not. So tortured am I! These lips will never again taste such sweetness. These ears will never again be tantalized by your rich timbres. These hands will never again find solace in your own. This heart, this heart will never again find completeness. Mine eyes, however, will forever keep you, so that I will never fail to remember.

    Forget me not. Oh, how I loathe those words! That perfectly crafted lie you once had uttered unto me. If but the fire of God would descend and envelop you, would I know justice. If but the incarnate evil from the depths of hell would come claim your soul, then I would feel justice. It was you who was guilty. You thought nothing of committing the basest of sins.

    Forget me not. How many times did you kill me in your heart, so you could do just that?

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Comments: 23

pm83writings [2009-01-23 05:09:10 +0000 UTC]

I like it. It's beautifully written. You have a real talent there. I read in one of the comments that you're writing a book. I hope that you'll finish it sometime an maybe post it on DA for us readers to enjoy, if not see it published.

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MilleniumFallcon In reply to pm83writings [2009-01-23 06:02:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much, and for the also! ^_^

I'm working on it, sometimes these things can be more slow going than you want them to be.

I am however also working on a fairytale as well that I will be posting up soon. You might enjoy that as an in betweener. If I get further along with my book, I will most likely post up a snippet or two. Thank you again, and I'm glad you enjoyed the read!

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LuneDeDame [2009-01-11 16:10:34 +0000 UTC]

OMG..i was going through some relationship turmoil about the same time..Lond Distance thing..

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MilleniumFallcon In reply to LuneDeDame [2009-01-13 04:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Very curious.

Well, I'm glad you enjoyed a bit of my writing, and thank you very much for the fave. ^_^

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LuneDeDame In reply to MilleniumFallcon [2009-01-13 04:17:04 +0000 UTC]

yes it is...

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Hanyou-Tenshiko [2008-12-07 17:34:05 +0000 UTC]

I swear to everything that is sacred that you and I have got to be synchronizing our moods or something.

*stare*

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MilleniumFallcon In reply to Hanyou-Tenshiko [2008-12-07 23:46:54 +0000 UTC]

So what your sayin is, that we both have synchronized depression?

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Hanyou-Tenshiko In reply to MilleniumFallcon [2008-12-08 01:34:19 +0000 UTC]

Apparently so.

...fun? >_>;

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MilleniumFallcon In reply to Hanyou-Tenshiko [2008-12-08 02:32:16 +0000 UTC]

lol.

I made Charlotte tear up.

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Hanyou-Tenshiko In reply to MilleniumFallcon [2008-12-08 03:51:48 +0000 UTC]

XD You seem to be good at that when you put your mind to it and write.

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MilleniumFallcon In reply to Hanyou-Tenshiko [2008-12-08 04:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Only when the voices are talking to me.

I think I've become a bit more nit picky when it comes to the said subject. I don't really share unless I can completely capture my reader.

Speaking of which...when you come here you can read the first chapter of my book. XD

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Hanyou-Tenshiko In reply to MilleniumFallcon [2008-12-08 05:41:17 +0000 UTC]

o.o! X3 YOU NEVER SAID YOU WERE WRITING A BOOK!!!!!

*FLAILS AT YOU*

I don't generally bother sharing my depressing stuff; no one tends to, y'know, wanna read something like that.

So I channel it from anything lyrical or poetic to something horribly depressing for one of my characters.

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MilleniumFallcon In reply to Hanyou-Tenshiko [2008-12-08 08:34:35 +0000 UTC]

Well, you never bother to ask what I'm working on writing-wise. Didn't you think I'd get around to it someday? I'm sorry.

Is that a hint that I should keep it to myself?

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Hanyou-Tenshiko In reply to MilleniumFallcon [2008-12-08 14:51:25 +0000 UTC]

DX I ask!

And then you do your little, "ku ku ku ku, wouldn't YOU like to know?" thing at me. I wanna know what it's about! D:

>.> No, that's a "You're more talented at making it sound amazing and like something people would read" compared to my "oh my GOD, someone just take her out back and shoot her." stuff. xD

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MilleniumFallcon In reply to Hanyou-Tenshiko [2008-12-09 19:53:35 +0000 UTC]



I can't tell you exactly what it's about. Because the whole point of the story is you(the reader) going along with the main character and trying to figure out just what the hell is going on. I will tell you this, it's about a 17 year old senior, named Olivia.

And since I'm such a nice person, here's a little teaser.

I was probably what you would call a dysfunctional person. I bet there were doctors out there just waiting for someone like me to come waltzing through their door. Fat chance. They could shove all that pompous empathy and sincere wishes for my better health, not to mention the plethora of experimental drugs, up a rectal cavity for all I cared.

Please.

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Hanyou-Tenshiko In reply to MilleniumFallcon [2008-12-09 22:23:12 +0000 UTC]

...I like where that is going.

A lot considering that's about my feelings as a whole on those drugs and on the majority of therapists.

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MilleniumFallcon In reply to Hanyou-Tenshiko [2008-12-09 22:42:50 +0000 UTC]

Hm, that's just a quote from the middle of the chapter. There's much more, and her opinions cover quite a bit.

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Hanyou-Tenshiko In reply to MilleniumFallcon [2008-12-10 02:44:17 +0000 UTC]

I like her already. <3

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MilleniumFallcon In reply to Hanyou-Tenshiko [2008-12-10 04:50:42 +0000 UTC]

Well than I'm on a good start if I've got an Olivia fan from an excerpt.

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Hanyou-Tenshiko In reply to MilleniumFallcon [2008-12-10 06:12:04 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait to read the rest! X3333

My thirst for reading materials is never sated.

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MilleniumFallcon In reply to Hanyou-Tenshiko [2008-12-10 06:49:36 +0000 UTC]

I know.

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Hanyou-Tenshiko In reply to MilleniumFallcon [2008-12-10 07:24:11 +0000 UTC]

XD My last trip to the library netted me 17 books.

All of them read; even the ones I rolled my eyes at and didn't care for.

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MilleniumFallcon In reply to Hanyou-Tenshiko [2008-12-10 18:32:12 +0000 UTC]

Desperate anyone?

Seriously, you need to MAKE yourself read slower.

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