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Mini-Magpie — Systematic Enigmatic
Published: 2010-11-16 21:12:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1960; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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Mr Ominous has a silver beardwith a golden braid
defying the sagging years
a rust free shiney relic
he's Trying to be psycadellic
Spread eagled in a field
west of the train track
holding a buttercup to his chin
dimple doesn't like the yellow
stubble shows a gypsy fellow
friction on archaic skin
skipping the bacon back
singes marking graceful sin
bathing under liquid light
swimming in a sea of plight
Splintered feet deceive
a life gleeming luxury
of fresh art and
modern coffee
a stumble through the trees
lead him to new ideas
a time for common decency
He is Mr Ominous
he wants to do more,
he wants to be more.
He wants to feel butter.
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Comments: 10
Interesting piece. I really like the rhythm and rhyme scheme of it... it really works.
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"friction on archaic skin" I LOVE this line.
Interesting piece, great imagery!
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It kind of reminded me of crumbling pyramids.. possibly because I've recently seen despicable me 
Thankyou lovely
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And is awesome. But I don't drink coffee.
(I tease. It's still very lovely though.)
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Clearly
...Ah, I wouldn't call you ominous cookie C:
Maybe you should drink coffee. This time of year it comes with gingerbread goodness.
And thankyou
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Some people might just call me that, though.
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Possibly.. I'm not too fond of drinking milk though
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