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Mini-nick — All Is Bright
Published: 2011-06-18 04:55:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 225; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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The clouds pass by,The babies cry,
The leaves fall,
And the birds call.
The wind blows,
And the father mows,
The son plays,
And the trees sway.
All is calm,
All is right.
All is sound,
All is bright.
The girl smiles,
And the boy waves,
The guest stays the while,
And the sprinkler sprays.
All is calm,
All is right.
All is sound,
All is bright.
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Comments: 28
this has a nice rhythm to it! and it's happy o.o you feeling ok?
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coolio, thx many much mucho bree xD
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Love it! Always happy to see your wonderful writing!!! XD
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sounds like a poem about summer :3
but that's just because it's talking about sprinklers.
and y'know, sprinklers complete summer. XD
anywho, great jobb. i havent read any writing from you in a while
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lol, thats cuz i havent written anything in a while C:
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Nick. It truly confounds me how you can write like this and then talk and your words are all jumbled and just cofuse people~
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thats the magic of me i guess.
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its impressive. and one of the many reasons you = awesometacular
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thx. i couldnt fall asleep last night (shockingly) but mainly just cuz of too many things on my mind. so....what i do when that sorta thing ALWAYS happens...i write.
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and it always turns out really good too. Dude I was so tired after last night. I tried to put stuff online but I had to go to bed...and I passed out in like 5 seconds :/
so what kindsa stuff wass bugging ya?
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stuffetty stuff.
if its gonna bug u, just send me a note or whatnot and i'll tell u, but im not writing any of it on heres.
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well its not really gonna bug me...but if I could help by listening or anything I'd be glad to
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so is that a 'yes you can help' or a 'no its all good brah'?
lol
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well okies then lol
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I'm glad to see you're writing again. I missed your writing.
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