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Published: 2011-10-13 02:08:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 324; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 3
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If onceI wrote
A poem.
And one poem
I did write.
Would ever you care to read it?
~would you care to know my plight?
If once I wrote a poem.
That poem would be a sight
To mortal eyes galore!
~A poem none could write.
I write this now
In sheer regret.
For none will know how
I'd become upset.
Stare at me now.
~eyes sullen and wet.
And Let Me Allow
~This Last Regret
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Comments: 22
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFT.
i seriously wish i could have been the first comment
im really mad because you say all the time that you hate your writing.
HOW.
HOW IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE WHEN ITS SO GOOD?
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because i dont see the point in my w r i t i n g
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i LOVE this concept. the only thing i have problems with are the unevenness in the rhythm but other than that BRAVO
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yea. i agree, the middle was/is iffy, i myself rlly dont like this one at all; it had such a great idea in the start...and then...bleh, i feel like it turned out horribly. But no matter. Im glad u liked it for the most part. ^^
And as usual; thx for ur feedback Em, muchh appreciated ;D
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i'm glad we agree about this one then lol and not a problem!
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so. no biggie. but unless you had some obscure meaningful play on words going on that I didn't take the time to analyze or consider, 'shear' should be 'sheer'
otherwise jaw= dropped
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ohshit did i rlly? wow.
thx. and lol.
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I was just saying shear is also a word so if it was an awesome play oon words than I'd def say well done lol.
no probs its soopa doopa
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lol it wasnt intended as a playonwords.....BUT if u took it that way; GREAT! That works! xD
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well. I mean. It might not work as a play on words. I was just saying it could potentially be if there was a good reason. a play on words without a proper reason is just a mistake lol
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.............not if YOU didnt know it was a mistake in the first place, in such a case, there would be no fault in my own that you could pin-point because you would have no heading as to put the fault on my own mistypings O.O
hows THAT for a mindfuck?
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very,VERY convincing mindfuck o.o
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Omgggg I love this so much!!! I can't eveeeennnnn!!!
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I just love your writing so much bro!!!
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Hahaha well thx kaffwin bahaha
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