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Published: 2011-03-05 15:41:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 164; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description The trees were swaying,
Just to and fro
And I wanted to know just why.
For the breeze of the day was quiet and calm
And the squirrels about collecting their food.
I thought it rather odd how those trees stood there
Slightly in the way,
In way of the view.
But cut them down?
That would only be worse,
To aggravate nature and bother the squirrels?
Now that is something I must not do,
I couldn't and I wouldn't.
And neither should you.
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xinsanefreakx [2011-04-25 04:57:52 +0000 UTC]

yesssa! trees must be left alone!! great poem. and thnx for the llama badge!

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Mini-nick In reply to xinsanefreakx [2011-04-25 14:10:30 +0000 UTC]

Haha yes they should! Trees are pretty awesome totally. And why ty!

Oh no problem! Likewise! C:

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xinsanefreakx In reply to Mini-nick [2011-04-26 00:23:27 +0000 UTC]

they are super awesome. chu welcome! likewise. i like that word xD

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Mini-nick In reply to xinsanefreakx [2011-04-26 00:28:03 +0000 UTC]

it IS a pretty awesum word isnt it? Haha ^^

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xinsanefreakx In reply to Mini-nick [2011-04-26 21:27:12 +0000 UTC]

yes. yes it is.

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Mini-nick In reply to xinsanefreakx [2011-04-26 22:26:05 +0000 UTC]

^^

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xinsanefreakx In reply to Mini-nick [2011-04-27 01:53:45 +0000 UTC]

~(*o*)~

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stargirl141 [2011-03-05 21:04:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah! I know him! He's a really good poet. I LOVE this poem btw. It's really put together.

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Mini-nick In reply to stargirl141 [2011-03-05 21:15:54 +0000 UTC]

Haha most pple know Robert Frost; he's the first poet I ever heard of too. All the way back in 3rd grade...when the teacher used to let us listen to her reading his poems...ahhh i loved that. I still have a great amount of respect for the ol' poet ^^

and thx abby!

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stargirl141 In reply to Mini-nick [2011-03-06 01:17:27 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome.

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Mini-nick In reply to stargirl141 [2011-03-06 05:22:35 +0000 UTC]

^^

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DRAGONlolidk123 [2011-03-05 18:53:18 +0000 UTC]

It's good...but a little of it's rhythm was lost...AYHOW I LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE TREES!!!!! xD good job nonetheless....if only i could get back to writing xD

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Mini-nick In reply to DRAGONlolidk123 [2011-03-05 20:22:40 +0000 UTC]

well see, thats kinda the thing-theres not SUPPOSED to be that much rhythm, except where it comes through at the end. But okies, i will debate over ur opinion with myself. Haha thxx again amanda and YES! i miss ur writing!! D:

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DRAGONlolidk123 In reply to Mini-nick [2011-03-07 15:34:49 +0000 UTC]

Well it's all good if you purposefully chose not to put lotsa rhythm in it then xD No problem, anytime.......I miss it to, but when i write nothing comes out right xD

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Mini-nick In reply to DRAGONlolidk123 [2011-03-07 23:06:17 +0000 UTC]

lol! yea, i guess if u knew that in the first place u coulda looked at it differently. Haha. And awww..well...i hope u can start writing again soon!!

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DRAGONlolidk123 In reply to Mini-nick [2011-03-08 17:18:19 +0000 UTC]

Yes I guess I could of

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Mini-nick In reply to DRAGONlolidk123 [2011-03-09 03:10:28 +0000 UTC]

WELL START GUESSING SUM MORE THEN!

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DRAGONlolidk123 In reply to Mini-nick [2011-03-09 03:19:13 +0000 UTC]

YESSIR xD

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Mini-nick In reply to DRAGONlolidk123 [2011-03-09 03:36:20 +0000 UTC]

YAYY XDD

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DRAGONlolidk123 In reply to Mini-nick [2011-03-09 03:48:05 +0000 UTC]

xD

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