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Description of Millm’nya, wielder of the Dividyendix:
Over her eyes were bony ridges which extended out to crests off to the rear and side of her head, and she had two much smaller rounded ones at the top of her head. Her mouth had oddly placed teeth and a gap in the middle, through which one could see two tongues. Her eyes were off-putting; not only did were they different colours, but they had different shapes, almost as if they belonged to different species. Her face was very round and wide, thanks to her crests. She had an unusually thin neck, with heavy vertebrae visible at the back. But the oddest thing about her was the seamless line that split her face neatly in two. It looked like it went through her, but yet it looked nothing like any scar. This extended down her face and neck, and her clothing bared an oddly similar line.
Her chest was not wide, but rather long and having slightly bulky-looking well defined ribs, visible under her clothing, but not as a sign of malnourishment. Her knobby shoulders gave way to thin but muscled arms ending in thick wrists fused straight onto the palm, with very conical delicate fingers. Her abdominal region was hidden below her belt and looked rather short by comparison to other features. Her spiky hips pointed in and backwards, featuring bony ridges resembling those on her face. Her legs were long and strong looking, featuring no visible structures unlike the rest of her body, and ended in her very wide and circular feet. Her skin was a pale cream colour, mottled randomly with a colour that was a mix of rust and chocolate. It had unusually varied texture across her visible body, at some points scaly, others hairy; it seemed to undulate with movement, and was littered with partially healed or covered burns, surgical and combat scars.
From her hands protruded part of her Bioweaponry; two gauntlet-like structures, with a few partially visible cores and canisters, and some tubes. It seemed to run along and through her body, as if to aid her body’s natural structure, not simply make use of it. Each shoulder had a small canister, a diode or two and a small section of thin piping. Littered across the visible parts were runes and diagrams, all gesturing to something embedded into her right and left palms, respectively. They were blurred because they each emitted a foggy light, one shimmering deep blue with tints of green, and the other shimmering with orange and red. She had a similar rig on each of her legs, but instead of going through her foot, they attached to her knee and ankle, and a large part of her calves were covered or made of metal and plastic. However, instead of blue and red glowing bits, one was golden brown, the other a hazy green with light tones of blue.
Her clothing was an odd toga, with a colour like wet, muddy sand. It had a hood and veil, implying that she liked to not be seen as much as possible, but not for stealth reasons. It went down to the elbows where it flowed somewhat loosely, but not in a manner that would impact combat; the fabric there was thinner than the rest, so it would sooner tear then impede her. Same thing at the shoulders; it seemed as though the main limit of her clothing was where it could interfere or snag in her own Bioweaponry. A tall, black belt that did feature a few pouches separated the upper and lower halves of the outfit, the bottom of which comprised of a combination skort and loincloth. She wore deep brown boots, which were steel-toed and had slightly adhesive soles, and were only ankle-high, again to avoid interfering with her Bioweaponry.
During battle, she faced off against THR33A, controlled by Tyson. The android sought out rubble to use as experimental weaponry to see how the opponent would react. Finding a large piece of rebar, it swung the metal rod in a vicious cleaving motion at the thing which, for lack of a name, could only be called that, and struck her straight in the head, at the peak of the odd “scar”. Her head burst in two along it, and that motion continued on downward along her body, splitting it in two. Her skin writhed as it quickly sealed off the exposed flesh, which oddly leaked no fluids. She fell to the ground in exactly two halves, a shocked expression on each face. That shocked expression quickly changed though as her bioweaponry whirred to life: glowing and pulsing through her body, her skin again writhed, seemingly reaching out to her other half. However, to the observing Tyson’s surprise, instead a boney structure quickly followed it, regenerating her lost half. And so he watched dumbfounded as his foe duplicated, demonstrating that she had the advantage of numbers, and who knew what else. (Well, I did, but considering I can exist everywhere and everywhen within my section of The Experiment, I know many things)
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Comments: 35
Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-02-20 15:23:39 +0000 UTC]
The Warhound, Z’ehvan’s AMV, was an interesting and unique machine. Built somewhat like a multi-layered gyroscope, it had three layers and a chassis for each layer, and was made out of lower grade nanobots. This allowed it to shift and rearrange larger parts, and repair damage, but not to the extent of the Ranger or other higher grade, purely nanorobotic constructs.
The outermost layer had four arcs that stretched up the spherical vehicle, and cupped the bottom. The bottom had a powerful levitation engine, useful for flight and “jumping” on land. Each of the arcs was where the powerful suspension joints for the four wheel arms met the chassis. Each wheel arm had a four wheeled rig at the base, making the “foot”. This had a secure but flexible link to the main body of the arm, which housed the engine useful for thrust and powering the wheels, a mini turret capable of 360xz; 270yx; 180yz rotations, and heavy plating backed by an energy shield. The engines were massive: during flight the wheels retracted into the arm and acted as additional boosters for the engines, and same thing underwater, except for the use of rotors. They were massive energy guzzlers and required a massive amount of energy to run; this is partly the reason for the uniqueness of the Warhound: only Tyson had the tech to make it feasible (before the Conspirators stole the tech from him, which he also did to them).
The second layer of the Warhound was the one that featured the weaponry. It had exactly 5 weapon locations, with two heavier canons, two heavy automatic weapons, and the stungun, a weapon capable of paralyzing men and machines. Each weapon was capable of modifying itself a little, or combining with another (usually the heavy and automatic guns combined) and rearranging their location on the shell, by melting into it at one point and reappearing at another. These energy weapons are also partly responsible for the Warhound’s energy-guzzling tendencies. The Bulldog carries a bit of additional weaponry for the Warhound at all times, because they are usually mounted on the Bulldog; the two vehicles can exchange most weapons with ease, so long as Maximus physically transfers them from one vehicle to another (it can be done in the Spearhead as well, but that’s generally out of combat).
The innermost layer of the Warhound was the control center. It only features one seat, but the cockpit is never empty: the ever-present AI helps to drive and/or shoot, and the neuro-link between Z’ehvan and his vehicle allows him to control it like he would his own hand. It has no actual windshield; instead it has hundreds of micro-cameras, eliminating the concept of a blind spot, and allows for fantastic active camo. That being said, the default colour scheme was green and brown camo pattern, highlighted with stone-grey. In order for Z’ehvan to enter, the sides literally part, forming a tube, and making it look like he’d photoshopped reality.
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-02-21 15:09:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, thank you. Anything i need to improve, or you feel i left out? What did i do particularily well?
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Jesstalpaedanplz In reply to Mini-Squatch [2014-02-21 15:34:35 +0000 UTC]
I find the description of the skin very interesting. You have a way with words, my friend.
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-02-21 15:41:15 +0000 UTC]
skin? jess i was asking about the description of the Warhound i sent you in a comment.....
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-02-21 17:02:18 +0000 UTC]
yeah. so again, what did i do well? did i miss anything? what did i do well, yadda yadda yadda
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Jesstalpaedanplz In reply to Mini-Squatch [2014-02-21 19:21:39 +0000 UTC]
Very interesting concept. Had a bit of trouble understanding some of it, but my brain's all muddled today anyway..
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-03-18 13:28:50 +0000 UTC]
i'll just send it to you in a note
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-03-24 16:37:02 +0000 UTC]
you still never gave me any feedback XD
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-03-25 13:15:10 +0000 UTC]
instead of facepalming, you could just read it and send me feedback XD
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-03-25 17:18:15 +0000 UTC]
....you say that yet you've not done it XD
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Jesstalpaedanplz In reply to Mini-Squatch [2014-03-25 17:39:11 +0000 UTC]
I've been in school all morning.
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-03-25 20:41:04 +0000 UTC]
Ah. Forgive me, i assumed if you were on DA it was that you had spare time XD
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Jesstalpaedanplz In reply to Mini-Squatch [2014-03-25 20:50:57 +0000 UTC]
I just forgot to log out.
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-03-26 13:02:17 +0000 UTC]
i was moreso refferring to the times you were replying to my comments
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Jesstalpaedanplz In reply to Mini-Squatch [2014-03-26 13:41:15 +0000 UTC]
I had like five minutes.
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-04-09 16:48:57 +0000 UTC]
well i require your assistance yet again. I set myself on redesigning Cligsean, but i completely forgot what the heck his TD has for specialization, so i decided to simply reassign him. Anyways, i got stuck on the design: originally i had a several dinosaurid creatures, but those forms are just too bulky to have combat effectiveness. So then i contemplated a smaller creature, wide, flatter body (like an alligator) with somewhat large legs at the side, again inspired by crocodiles and salamanders. He'd have the ability to climb walls and such, and his body would be covered in slimy feathers, which could secrete some different stuff(like the ones near his hands and feet secreting some stickier stuff to help with climbing).
Then i had another idea, which was to have his species undergo about 7 different changes in body structure throughout each specimen's approximately 200 year lifespan. This way, most of my designs would see into these life stages, but the one i last proposed would be the one Cligsean would be in during the procession of War of the Wielders.
So, what do you think?
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Jesstalpaedanplz In reply to Mini-Squatch [2014-04-09 19:00:41 +0000 UTC]
Love the idea, especially the slimy feathers. Perhaps, in that stage of life, he could somewhat resemble a postosuchus, which in itself is basically a longlegged crocodile.
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-04-09 23:09:36 +0000 UTC]
ehhhh sorta. So you think giving him a life cycle of nearly constant growth into a different form is a good idea?
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Jesstalpaedanplz In reply to Mini-Squatch [2014-04-09 23:13:23 +0000 UTC]
Yes; it helps with variety. The only problem is figuring out how to write it in a non-confusing manor.
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-04-09 23:14:45 +0000 UTC]
Well it should have little impact on the actual story-telling, so its not a major concern.
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-04-10 02:10:18 +0000 UTC]
Also, Jess have you had any time to give me feedback on the description of the Warhound yet? XD
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Jesstalpaedanplz In reply to Mini-Squatch [2014-04-10 02:25:16 +0000 UTC]
I...Thought I did..
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-04-10 14:03:33 +0000 UTC]
well not a very helpful or indepth one, because you didnt really have the time, so you said.
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Jesstalpaedanplz In reply to Mini-Squatch [2014-04-10 16:43:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh, okay. Yeah, I can re-review it .
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Mini-Squatch In reply to Jesstalpaedanplz [2014-04-10 17:01:54 +0000 UTC]
yay i did send it to you in a note, i believe.
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