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Stop asking her whatShe thinks
Stop asking her how
She feels
Stop asking her
What's wrong
Because if you have
To ask
Everything is
She wants you to
Know
"I don't know what's
Up with you unless you tell me!"
Exactly.
That's exactly why she wants
You to know before.
Yes,
It's irrational,
Idealistic, maybe even
Ridiculous
But it's not
Impossible.
She wants you to wake
Up in the middle of the night
When she's miles away and
Crying
She wants you to
Hold her tight
Before asking
She wants to be
Part of your instinct,
Because she wants to be
A part of you
She wants you to
Wait when necessary
And come when
the time is right
She wants you to
Surprise her with
Butterfly lockets
Intertwined roses
Fragile lullabies,
Not green paper and
Black lace and
Raised eyebrows
She wants a public
Declaration, a rescue from
Monotony
Not secrets only she
Can keep
(actually, she likes those,
Too, but
Horse-drawn carriages and
Guitar ballads can be
Better with an audience,
A jury, proof)
But you have
To figure it out
For yourself
(good luck
With thatβ¦)
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Comments: 24
Aborro [2014-08-22 02:23:57 +0000 UTC]
This is... I love this, and there are so many times when I've needed to hear this.
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biencutza [2010-06-23 15:28:31 +0000 UTC]
I hate when my boyfriend asks me what's wrong I just want him to figure it out by himself
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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to biencutza [2010-06-23 18:21:39 +0000 UTC]
EXACTLY. Well, I'm not with my boyfriend anymore. But that was one of the little reasons. It didn't feel little to me, but most people thought it was petty.
Anyway, thanks for faving, and glad you liked it.
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biencutza In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-06-23 18:26:09 +0000 UTC]
no problem and i am sorry about you and your boyfriend
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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to biencutza [2010-06-23 18:36:22 +0000 UTC]
yeah well...it happens.
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Slightly-Odd [2010-02-18 18:07:18 +0000 UTC]
Love. Can't live with it, can't live without it.
To be fair, it's not just girls that are irrational about love. It seems to have that effect on everyone.
Oh yeah, and great poem as well
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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to Slightly-Odd [2010-02-18 23:08:16 +0000 UTC]
Yes, but we seem *particularly* irrational lol
thanks
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Slightly-Odd In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-02-19 14:34:18 +0000 UTC]
Lol, true.
No problem!
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let--me--out [2010-02-15 21:08:44 +0000 UTC]
"Yes,
It's irrational,
Idealistic, maybe even
Ridiculous"
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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to let--me--out [2010-02-15 21:10:15 +0000 UTC]
yes, yes it its
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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to let--me--out [2010-02-15 21:13:45 +0000 UTC]
Do you like reading coupley things? If so, I have a few more pieces...
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let--me--out In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-02-15 21:15:58 +0000 UTC]
sure i do!
i'd love to read them :]
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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to let--me--out [2010-02-15 21:18:51 +0000 UTC]
alrighty...I'll do poems for now ^-^
[link] "Come on Closer"
[link] "He Doesn't Talk To Me"
[link] "She Doesn't Talk To Me"
That's the most recent.
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LRainbow [2010-02-11 21:21:22 +0000 UTC]
I really liked this I like the short stanzas particulary
*faves*
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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to LRainbow [2010-02-11 21:26:32 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I do those. thanks
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PleasurelyPainful [2010-02-07 18:08:37 +0000 UTC]
Lovely! ^^ You're a great writer! C: <3
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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to PleasurelyPainful [2010-02-07 18:11:39 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much!
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PleasurelyPainful In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-02-07 18:25:37 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome! ^^ <3
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fiction-freak [2010-02-06 07:14:49 +0000 UTC]
Because they havn't worked out how to change their reptoductive organs yet
This is brilliant! I think you summed our demands up pretty well really
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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to fiction-freak [2010-02-06 07:26:00 +0000 UTC]
I thought so
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