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mistsofavalon4ever β€” a proper farewell by-nc-nd
Published: 2009-12-28 00:12:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 324; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 5
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Description Think of me when you leave,
Because I'm out there anyway
You'll find bits and pieces of
Who I used to be

You'll see me in the rearview mirror
The dressing room reflection

You'll hear me in the songs I could
Recite word for word

You'll touch me in the morning,
Thinking for a moment that the
Lump next to you in the bed
Is me…

You'll smell me in the evening
When the moon flowers come out and
The rain lifts my essence from your memories

You'll taste me when honey coats your
Tongue and you slide the chapstick of mine
You've "borrowed" across your lonely lips

You'll find me in your dreams,
In them I'll be waiting
For you and the memories will stir-
Your favorite parts were some
Of my hardest.

The beginning- strangers
The middle- friends
The end- of us

So don't you dare leave
Before me

At least have the
Courtesy to shake my hand

We need to jump off the cliff
Together

Maybe not holding hands,
But at least at the same time.
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Comments: 11

Emocinderella [2010-02-05 16:11:31 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, I have been listening to that song recently, and I thought of it (without reading your artist comments) when I read your poem!

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to Emocinderella [2010-02-05 23:59:42 +0000 UTC]

*spooky*

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crystalpurity [2010-02-05 03:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Very pretty ^^

I like the song its based off of.

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to crystalpurity [2010-02-05 04:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Isn't paramore fab?

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crystalpurity In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-02-06 06:41:49 +0000 UTC]

YEAH!!!!

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Alois-Noette [2010-01-03 02:50:24 +0000 UTC]

This one had so many images Me likey

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to Alois-Noette [2010-01-03 03:34:56 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Glad you liked.

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Alois-Noette In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-01-03 03:39:31 +0000 UTC]

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fiction-freak [2009-12-28 01:56:39 +0000 UTC]

You'll smell me in the evening
When the moon flowers come out and
The rain lifts my essence from your memories.

Those are beautiful lines. So wonderfully descriptive and emotive.

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to fiction-freak [2009-12-28 02:00:24 +0000 UTC]

ooooh fancy word. I shall keep that in mind. Sounds better than "emotional"...emotive, emotive, emotive... always for praise/criticism.

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fiction-freak In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2009-12-28 02:13:52 +0000 UTC]

No sweat and any time

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