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mistsofavalon4ever — purity by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-01-24 06:34:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 523; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 3
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Description Why do you call her

          naiive

with a sneer so judgmental?
Maybe it's because you wish you
Yourself,
Could still be that

          innocent-

But you bowed to lipstick
And eyeliner and fishnets
And men and the cold
Bathroom floors.
Your heart is intertwined
With threads
Of cynicism

You miss being

          pure

Even though when you were,
You every night wished not to be
So pathetically unknown

Oh, the irony
At both periods

        The longing hearts

Want opposite things
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Comments: 12

Alois-Noette [2010-01-25 02:20:43 +0000 UTC]

I agree.

It makes me a little sad, though; I'm sort of in the middle of the two, I guess. It's an unhappy place to be.

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to Alois-Noette [2010-01-25 02:25:08 +0000 UTC]

I guess I'm in the middle of them, too I'm not one, and I don't want to be the other yet at the same time I do :/

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Alois-Noette In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-01-25 02:29:38 +0000 UTC]

It's somewhat agonizing. God.

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LemonyLessay [2010-01-24 23:00:08 +0000 UTC]

Great! Well written, good length, nice structure. I like the topic too.

Basically good all around!

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to LemonyLessay [2010-01-24 23:04:01 +0000 UTC]

ah thanks!

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fiction-freak [2010-01-24 12:54:46 +0000 UTC]

This is really well written! Nice layouts and the flow is great.
I've always found purity amusing because I have yet to meet a pure person who was not stupid at the same time.
I'm sure once I meet a smart pure person I will be of another mind.

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to fiction-freak [2010-01-24 16:30:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I haven't either, but you never know.

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fiction-freak In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2010-01-25 05:03:48 +0000 UTC]

They may be just around the corner

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vogue-angel [2010-01-24 06:38:06 +0000 UTC]

omg, i love this so much. AMAZING job!

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to vogue-angel [2010-01-24 06:41:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Thank you for your and praise and the fave!

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psycho-wolf-maiden [2010-01-24 06:36:16 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT!
{ 1st to comment!}

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mistsofavalon4ever In reply to psycho-wolf-maiden [2010-01-24 06:42:06 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad!
And congrats

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