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Published: 2011-10-23 01:38:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 159; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description Dear Fairytales,

Why did you make me believe in shooting stars.

Thinking if I wish enough than I would see all my problem go away.

Dear Fairytales,

Why did you make me believe in true love and my prince to be.

For all I got and all I see is endless hurt and shattered dreams.

Dear Fairytales,

Why did you make me think I could be a princess and no one would ever complain.

For the only thing that I got was backstabbing and pain.

Dear Fairytales,

Here is the deal the real world doesn't care

Only showing me I need to stop

Believing in the lies you tell.  
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Comments: 16

naomithewolf [2012-02-15 23:02:40 +0000 UTC]

i like it much more now

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mitsukithefox In reply to naomithewolf [2012-03-01 23:55:36 +0000 UTC]

that is good >3<

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naomithewolf In reply to mitsukithefox [2012-03-28 15:38:57 +0000 UTC]

yush! omg i'm so bored right now! will you call me please i need to tell you something!

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mitsukithefox In reply to naomithewolf [2012-03-31 04:44:22 +0000 UTC]

what do you have to telll me

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naomithewolf In reply to mitsukithefox [2012-03-31 18:16:01 +0000 UTC]

i dont remember

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mitsukithefox In reply to naomithewolf [2012-04-05 21:27:30 +0000 UTC]

Crap

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naomithewolf [2011-10-30 04:25:41 +0000 UTC]

This is inspiring O.O

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mitsukithefox In reply to naomithewolf [2011-10-30 19:02:29 +0000 UTC]

you think so O.o

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naomithewolf In reply to mitsukithefox [2011-11-12 03:19:24 +0000 UTC]

heck yes!

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mitsukithefox In reply to naomithewolf [2011-11-19 01:44:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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naomithewolf In reply to mitsukithefox [2011-11-20 03:58:42 +0000 UTC]

no prob!

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mitsukithefox In reply to naomithewolf [2011-11-24 19:44:30 +0000 UTC]

okay i'm stuff from thankgiving

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naomithewolf In reply to mitsukithefox [2011-11-29 03:17:18 +0000 UTC]

haha i was but not now xD

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mitsukithefox In reply to naomithewolf [2011-12-02 00:14:20 +0000 UTC]

me to XD

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XxApplelolipopsxX [2011-10-23 01:53:05 +0000 UTC]

I really like this and I agree with it completely. However, maybe the last line could be a little stronger. But that's it. I do remember how easy it was believing everything would end in a Happily Ever After, and being content with that euphoric ignorance. But now that I know better, I wished Fairy Tales braced me for the real world so I wouldn't have been so disappointed in my adolescence.
Great job!

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mitsukithefox In reply to XxApplelolipopsxX [2011-10-23 03:17:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks yeah I felt I need to put something but I just couldn't come up with anything expect that poor line that is weak compared to the others if you have any tip but don't feel like you need to

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