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Published: 2010-08-01 09:08:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 747; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 11
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Description Eyes are gazing gaily
As it steps across the floor
Screeching into darkness
And an open cellar door
Beckons all the while
With a call no one will hear
While broken bones and saucer scones
Will never be so near.

"I know the secrets of the scrawling writing on the wall.
Confess unto me scathing lies and with a hermit crawl."
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Comments: 5

TehKatieMonster [2011-10-26 20:29:37 +0000 UTC]

This totally creeps me out but I love it.

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tetemeko [2010-08-04 01:51:19 +0000 UTC]

You really did have a theme going on here, didn't you?

Usually I italicize my favorite line, but I had trouble picking one out this time. It all matches together perfectly.

i still wish to interview you, but at the moment I'm packing for big, bad college. I'd like to get a set idea of what I'd like to ask you, but expect something from me within the week!

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equerin [2010-08-01 14:50:32 +0000 UTC]

It's nice to see poetry around here that actually rhymes. And this one rhymes very well, I like it.

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ML-Larson In reply to equerin [2010-08-01 14:52:56 +0000 UTC]

That means a lot, since this is my first attempt at it in, ever.

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equerin In reply to ML-Larson [2010-08-01 14:53:43 +0000 UTC]

It's a good start.

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