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In April my cousin was getting married and she asked as a favor to take her some pictures.Here is one of the preview ones. It was my first time taking photos at a wedding hopefully they came out right.
I'll be uploading my favs in the next weeks.
I'm requesting critique to hear some feedback because I'll like to know what I can improve. Thanks!
Model: Ivette
Photo taken by Me.
April 18, 2009
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Comments: 20
beccaecka [2012-01-25 07:53:15 +0000 UTC]
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I am in love with her hair and make up combination. I love simplicity.
I applaud your angle and composition. Her facial features aren't too hidden beneath her hair and veil. Also, you still can see the detail of the dress and veil. Very well done.
Your lighting is average, but that's not a bad thing. The only thing I see that needs work really is the background. I spy a dvd player... hee hee.
All in all this is a very lovely photo and I'm sure your cousin loved the picture.
Also consider photo editing for some fun alternate pictures. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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whttigrluvr [2009-05-26 07:59:35 +0000 UTC]
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This is a nice picture. I've marked the originality as a medium score mostly because I've seen works like this before. But regardless of that it's still a good shot.
When I saw it, it looked to me as if she was second guessing herself. Not exactly because of the person she will be dedicating herself to more entirely than she already has but the fact that marriage is a HUGE step in life.
I'm willing to bet that everyone will second guess themselves once while engaged. For the sole fact that is such a big step.
And even though it was your first time taking wedding shots. This came out very nicely as mentioned before. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/a/a⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
" title="Aww" /> You should try doing more weddings in the future.
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sailing4ever [2010-06-12 02:10:33 +0000 UTC]
I love the angle but only if you didn't get the technology in the back ground. I love it though. I think if you do my wedding pictures do if after the wedding and do some pictures outside :3 In a garden or something. But your cousin is absolutely beautiful. Who ever married her got the jack pot XD
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Mlarad In reply to sailing4ever [2010-06-12 08:51:13 +0000 UTC]
you're right! It was my first time trying to do some weeding photography I wish I would have been more careful with some details.
Agreed, everyone in the family says the same thing, he is a lucky guy ^_^
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sailing4ever In reply to Mlarad [2010-06-14 02:20:24 +0000 UTC]
Well now you know for the next time :3 For your first time it is very beautiful..
He probably is. Even though I know nothing about your cousin. XD
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Mlarad In reply to maggifan [2009-05-26 08:21:17 +0000 UTC]
yes she was looking beautiful!
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Spwinkles [2009-05-05 23:40:59 +0000 UTC]
Wow, so pretty! Congrats to her. ^^
I love the angle.
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