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Published: 2004-08-02 06:05:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 34; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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A small, bold substanceProvokes the dancing flame
He watches
Waits
Then slowly inches closer
Ignoring the burning sensation
His senses screaming, “No!”
He takes one step forward
Two deep breaths
And walks, head held high
Into the unknown world beyond
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Comments: 10
Pendragon2879 [2004-08-12 15:45:01 +0000 UTC]
So did he walk into the fire or what? I think he did, he did no matter what you say! He did damn it and don't fight it!
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moldygrape In reply to Pendragon2879 [2004-08-12 17:14:37 +0000 UTC]
jeez...*hold hands up innocently* i donno!! think what you'd like...
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DarkRockFaerie [2004-08-04 10:23:49 +0000 UTC]
I likes!!! (again!) lol! I love the last line....
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BittersweetLuna In reply to BittersweetLuna [2004-08-02 17:53:12 +0000 UTC]
hehehe...didn't scare you, did I?
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moldygrape In reply to BittersweetLuna [2004-08-02 17:17:52 +0000 UTC]
lol, thanks, i think.
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Jack-O [2004-08-02 16:40:37 +0000 UTC]
fire fire fire fire fire fire fire...yummy.
well written too.
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