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moldygrape — For Jason
Published: 2004-09-25 12:22:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 71; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description late in the early morning
when sleep escapes me
i think of you holding me
the warmth of your fingers
laced with mine so peacefully
keeping me alive

what a shock in my viens
like Franenstiens monster
i jerk awake from the sensation
and i pray it never goes away

as stupid
corny
fake
drugged
imcomplete...
this poem may sound
its because thats who i am
right here
in front of the world
i'm giving you a peice of me

i dont know what else to say
or how to say it, exactly
so here in the early hours of another painfully dead day
all i can say is i love you
and always will
till the day you finally kill me
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Comments: 13

fendergirl [2004-10-02 01:34:35 +0000 UTC]

Awesome last line!!

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forgotteninnocence [2004-09-28 01:27:49 +0000 UTC]

i heart this so much!

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DarkRockFaerie [2004-09-26 14:01:01 +0000 UTC]

I love this..........the ending is perfect.

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RedKarma [2004-09-26 10:38:34 +0000 UTC]

You should love this. Very honest!

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Soul-Of-Fire [2004-09-26 04:53:47 +0000 UTC]

Awh, that's so cute
Keep it real.
~Sha~

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MoonlitShadow [2004-09-26 00:27:23 +0000 UTC]

omkg, totoally understand that feeling. i really love this. its justl ike what i always try to write and fail... snag that guy while he is around.

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ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2004-09-25 19:37:52 +0000 UTC]

1st and 4th stanzas rule all.

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NightShade14 [2004-09-25 18:23:09 +0000 UTC]

Why did make a poem for me?
Im not that great...

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mutexvoice [2004-09-25 16:40:55 +0000 UTC]

Oo! neetsee!

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Jack-O [2004-09-25 15:32:53 +0000 UTC]

i love the ending. "all I can say i love you
and always will
until the day you finally kill me" awesome. aww. tis cute. lol

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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-09-25 15:35:05 +0000 UTC]

thankies ^^

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Jack-O In reply to moldygrape [2004-09-25 15:41:45 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome dear

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pm-grafix [2004-09-25 13:02:40 +0000 UTC]

beautiful.

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