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Published: 2004-08-18 06:56:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 150; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 15
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For a second I saw youIn your confident stride
Weaving casually through the crowd
Politely apologizing if you touched another
Coffee in hand
You seem ready for the day ahead
For a second my life froze in place
As your wandering gaze settled on me
For the first time I feel insecure
A touch of fear coursing through me
And when I looked back over my shoulder
You were still watching
For a second I smiled at you
And you grinned in exchange
I was walking on a cloud for the first time
Somehow I had to remember you
So I held on a little longer
Letting you soak through me for sure
For a second I thought you were gone
Yet somehow you found me again
And this time graced me with your splendor
Our conversation was devastatingly short
Nonetheless it was ours
To see you go was something I could not do
So I ran after you as soon as I could get away
For a second I wanted to cry
Again I lost those eyes
So alone I felt at that moment
I screamed with a new frustration
A burning pain of loneliness shot through my veins
Like an addicts heroin
I needed you again
For a second I stopped breathing
My gaze lingered on all who wore green
All the eyes I dared to look into were empty
Perhaps fate will do me a favor now
And let me see you again
So I can let you know I saw you too
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Comments: 47
PinkHairPrincess [2004-10-07 03:24:52 +0000 UTC]
hehehehe u probley wont read this cuz all the other coments are from aug. but i totaly get this one but i name mine like KEVIN (sigh)
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dutchshun [2004-10-02 16:25:23 +0000 UTC]
Would you want to display this poem on my front page, you are very welcome to do it I like this a lot, add your name to it and people can read your beautiful words and visit you after that, not that you are short of them. Let me know or simply just copy paste (dont forget to add your name) and drop into comment box, spread the word of a quality poet. ps Error732 another writing hero of mine, he is on my list of friends. Have a look at him his words are awesome!
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moldygrape In reply to dutchshun [2004-10-02 16:39:48 +0000 UTC]
thank yeh, i will sometime
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dutchshun In reply to moldygrape [2004-10-02 16:43:36 +0000 UTC]
ok, its entirely upto you.
Thanks again for surfing in.
Poetry Rocks!
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subtlenuances [2004-09-09 16:30:34 +0000 UTC]
I feel like I've read this before.
Oh well, I guess I'lll check out your other new stuff..
This is good by the way!!!
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DarkRockFaerie [2004-08-29 18:33:22 +0000 UTC]
Very well written
I loved how you described it all so well..........and how you felt
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LocusDesperatus [2004-08-22 03:35:37 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing. I love it....I'm falling in love with your writing!
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mutexvoice [2004-08-19 18:58:45 +0000 UTC]
hehe...that's a nice little poem there. You seem him again, you corner him. lol
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abandonedpyro [2004-08-19 14:07:42 +0000 UTC]
run faster next time...dont let him slip from your grasp
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Pendragon2879 [2004-08-19 05:49:25 +0000 UTC]
Lol, green guy left a huge impression on you didn't he? I am in disbelief. Fighting the urge to fav this, I know if I fav this, i will have to go back and fav a lot of things. Lots and lots of your work. Poor me, great you.
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moldygrape In reply to Pendragon2879 [2004-08-19 05:52:40 +0000 UTC]
cha, fav it!! make me look good!! lol, jk.
yes, he did leave an impression. it was more about the fact that he talked to me when he saw me again. twas crazy. no guy had ever done that before...i mean he could've just walked by and pretended he didn't see me...
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Pendragon2879 In reply to moldygrape [2004-08-19 05:54:52 +0000 UTC]
But that would be the end of the story! He had to say something. A step up from the guy in white on the corner.
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moldygrape In reply to Pendragon2879 [2004-08-19 05:55:43 +0000 UTC]
*lovesick* i want him. NOW. find him servent boy!! find him or its no supper for the rest of your life.
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Pendragon2879 In reply to moldygrape [2004-08-19 05:57:59 +0000 UTC]
selfish master you are!!
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fendergirl [2004-08-18 22:44:55 +0000 UTC]
I like these lines:
Our conversation was devastatingly short
Nonetheless it was ours
Hey who knows, perhaps your paths will cross again.
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Jack-O [2004-08-18 20:38:59 +0000 UTC]
wow. This is awesome. I hope you find him Because this poem almosty made me cry :tear:
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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-08-18 20:41:58 +0000 UTC]
if i find him i'll be happy for fucking EVER. he was that awesome
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Jack-O In reply to moldygrape [2004-08-18 20:43:32 +0000 UTC]
hmmm. I hope you're right. I wouldn't want him to break your heart.
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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-08-18 20:44:35 +0000 UTC]
i bet he's forgotten me.
hard to let go.
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Jack-O In reply to moldygrape [2004-08-18 20:49:58 +0000 UTC]
I know. That's happened to me before. Now that I think about it, it was usually at the mall...
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moldygrape In reply to Jack-O [2004-08-18 22:11:11 +0000 UTC]
malls are dangerousss...lol
cha!
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Clownkiller752 [2004-08-18 19:32:02 +0000 UTC]
daaaaaaaaamn. I like ^-^ thats really awesome. you have a way with words.
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Clownkiller752 In reply to moldygrape [2004-08-18 20:35:46 +0000 UTC]
anytime ^-^ i love poems. yours are really good
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moldygrape In reply to Clownkiller752 [2004-08-18 20:37:45 +0000 UTC]
your artwork is awesome also you're in a band?
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Clownkiller752 In reply to moldygrape [2004-08-18 20:42:44 +0000 UTC]
hey thanks. yep, I'm in a band! and its awesome =B
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Kurt-n-ToddCLUB [2004-08-18 19:31:46 +0000 UTC]
Very cool. So sad and to the point. Its tyruely beautiful and very true
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Soul-Of-Fire [2004-08-18 16:31:07 +0000 UTC]
I can relate to this one pretty easily in a case or two I've dealt with. Awesome job
Keep it real.
~Sha~
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MoonlitShadow [2004-08-18 15:51:28 +0000 UTC]
very very nice, but i dont seem to understand. I get what ur feeling and writing, but who is he?
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moldygrape In reply to MoonlitShadow [2004-08-18 16:12:54 +0000 UTC]
He's Green Shirt Guy. I dont know his name...damn, i wish i did. I saw in the other day and we connected i think...he went that extra mile to talk to me...*melt*
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MoonlitShadow In reply to moldygrape [2004-08-18 16:44:47 +0000 UTC]
hmm, you need to just keep getting out where you met him and see if he comes back...if you are close enough to him to go back, he might also be. go at the same day same time.
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sleepdrunk [2004-08-18 15:34:12 +0000 UTC]
Very good my friend. I think stuff like this happens to us all, and leave it to moldy to put in the words that we go through
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soloira [2004-08-18 15:21:45 +0000 UTC]
so true so worldly but touching ... living a life it ist mine .. through ur eyes its like buying clothes without monney lol
Great Writing my friend
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moldygrape In reply to IcyNight [2004-08-18 15:22:06 +0000 UTC]
cha, thanks for the fav, hun
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