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moldygrape — Hunted
Published: 2004-08-02 06:13:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
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Like a breeze to the flameMy everything has been blown out
Those words that were spoken
Never stung so badly before
All thought leisurely falls apart
Leaving your curse upon my once-healed soul
And now I sway softly
The dark sadness weaving a fresh noose
This snake-like emotion slithers
Its dark eyes watching
Smelling eagerly for the weak spot
Its hungry fangs long for the flesh of the lonely
And the warm blood of the daring
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I have read your poem. MUAHAHA!!
er.. anyway. ^^ I found it interesting. For some reason it sounds like the entire poem is about how you lost out and hung yourself. I'm probably way off and my imagination enjoys itself when it runs away with me. But just thought you should know. XD
Eitherway, nice use of words.
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wow you are really good never doubt your talent you are amazing
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I really like this alot....I will ahve to explore your gallery and you are a must watch
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ooh thanks!! i watch you back ^^ mwaha
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Sorry, too ecstatic to pay attention! Yes yes moldy is writing again so all is good. Wait, I am late replying to this aren't I?
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lol, ur like a slug, man.
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Great imagery! I like the "leisurely falls apart" bit. A bit of contradiction there, almost an oxymoron. Cool
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Thanks much 
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I liked this. Brings to mind the word animalistic. Not even just because you used the word snake.
This part is my favorite:
This snake-like emotion slithers
Its dark eyes watching
Smelling eagerly for the weak spot
Its hungry fangs long for the flesh of the lonely
And the warm blood of the daring
Makes me want to put on a warm coat or at least cover all my vulnerable areas or something like that. It definately produces a physical reaction. I must fave it.
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"Smelling eagerly for the weak spot"
Disturbing....distubing but good!
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Good stuff ^.^ i r add you to favs, and buddy list0r thingy, stalkishish..........yes im gonna stalk you /puts on black clothing and nightvision goggles o.O
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Yey, please do!! 
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I likes! Specially:
"Its dark eyes watching
Smelling eagerly for the weak spot"
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very very interesting.
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thats alright. i dont mind. thanks
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