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Published: 2004-08-11 05:06:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 663; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 92
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A thin line of blood snakes down her arm as she gasps with pain. He is so thirsty…he cannot help himself. Quickly he tears the flesh, and begins to feed.Although I love vampire movies, glance away from this part and refocus on your face. In the dim light your tanned skin looks almost black. Your short hair is still crisp from the gel you put in hours ago. My feet are sitting lightly in your lap with your hands resting on my knees lazily.
Slowly, my gaze travels down, scanning your body. I shiver slightly and go back to your face. I can’t help but notice the fake lip ring you’ve still got on. I grin and wish I could get a real one, just to show you up again.
I can dream, can’t I?
Your eyes are still glued to the movie. The vampire has finished drinking and tossed the limp body out the window. Blood stains his teeth, and he grins, completely satisfied.
Your tongue slowly begins playing with the ring. My eyes widen and stomach flips. I try to rip my gaze from you, but cannot. This memorizes me.
I lean forward, brushing my lips against your neck, and softly kiss your tender skin. You jump slightly, but grin and pull my face up toward yours. Quickly our tongues meet and before I know it my hand is desperately pulling at your shirt. I’m now sitting on your lap, facing you. Your hand moves up my shirt and unhooks my bra. I quickly shrug it off and lift my shirt up over my head.
Slowly I run my tongue down your neck, kissing the skin softly. You moan and hold me close. I can tell you’ve been thinking of me too. I unbutton your pants and slide them down to reveal your boxers. Grinning, I slip my hands under the material…
A woman in the movie screams and I’m thrown back into reality. You’re still messing with the ring, only now you’re sliding it back and forth with your fingers.
A hunger for you has grown in my stomach and has now spread to my heart. Slowly I scoot closer to you and lay my head on your shoulder. After a second or two your head rests upon mine. Your breathing slows and soon I know you are asleep. I glance out the window and watch the sun rise, wondering what the hell is wrong with me.
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Comments: 49
drayfae [2005-06-26 06:15:11 +0000 UTC]
what is it about lip rings and vampire movies that make us horny,,,,,,,most curious
very well written....bravo!
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moldygrape In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-12 04:31:04 +0000 UTC]
good god, i'm sorry
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moldygrape In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-12 04:49:01 +0000 UTC]
*carries you to the bed and....*
*imagination fizzles and dies*
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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to moldygrape [2005-01-12 05:20:11 +0000 UTC]
*as does the lump in his pants*
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moldygrape In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-12 05:26:01 +0000 UTC]
o_O
*nibbles on your ear*
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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to moldygrape [2005-01-12 05:50:46 +0000 UTC]
*bleats like a lamb*
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moldygrape In reply to ThatGuyOnTheStreet [2005-01-12 17:14:05 +0000 UTC]
*shaves off all your hair and knits a sweater*
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ThatGuyOnTheStreet In reply to moldygrape [2005-01-13 03:27:18 +0000 UTC]
*bleats sadly and shivers*
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punkgoddess [2004-12-15 17:14:49 +0000 UTC]
..... *blink* okay...this is werid...i got bored and decided to brose DA.... prose
LocusDesperatus [2004-09-25 22:44:58 +0000 UTC]
I know I've already commented on this once...but it's too good...I can't sit here and not say anything.
But...how can I say something if I'm speechless?
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glitch16 [2004-09-19 22:02:41 +0000 UTC]
It is realistic, this is how people work, but I do enjoy the descriptiveness. Thank you for sharing
Aaron
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moldygrape In reply to glitch16 [2004-09-20 03:13:44 +0000 UTC]
thanks for reading and leaving a comment. ^^ much appreciated
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rosie-cheek-hamster [2004-09-06 16:33:32 +0000 UTC]
im sorry i know ive already left a comment but i wanted to tell you i think this is so good i keep coming back to read it again lol
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moldygrape In reply to rosie-cheek-hamster [2004-08-28 01:35:54 +0000 UTC]
thankies for the fav and watch ^^
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LocusDesperatus [2004-08-22 03:29:18 +0000 UTC]
This is really awesome. I feel like I felt every emotion, saw every scene in my head...it's just...wow.
I have something kind of like this written, I just haven't submitted it for reasons unknown...could be because the person it's about lurks around devART...but whatevaaaaa.
This is definitely a fav, and a watch, for more of this amazing writing.
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moldygrape In reply to LocusDesperatus [2004-08-22 04:09:13 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!! sha, what a wonderful comment!
i'd like to read it, please post!! pleasepleasepleaaaase??
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LocusDesperatus In reply to moldygrape [2004-08-22 15:29:18 +0000 UTC]
Hey, it was no problem! This is an amazing piece!!
Aw, alrighty, I'll post it sometime today, I promise.
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nonix [2004-08-22 02:24:22 +0000 UTC]
very good, i enjoyed it.
you might enjoy this story im working on called "le paranoir". feel free to check it out.
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HoundofCullin [2004-08-13 17:13:49 +0000 UTC]
Wow.
Seldom do I find a decent bit of poetry on DA.
This is awesome, and yet something about it unnerves me just the tiniest little bit.
You get my applause that's for bloody sure.
Bra to the Vo
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moldygrape In reply to HoundofCullin [2004-08-13 17:14:39 +0000 UTC]
lol, thanks!! glad you liked it
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BittersweetLuna [2004-08-12 19:50:36 +0000 UTC]
Hormones! Thas' all! Happy hunting, sugah'!
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Soul-Of-Fire [2004-08-12 06:56:51 +0000 UTC]
Damn, Sarah. This rocks.
Very intriguing.
Keep it real.
~Sha~
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moldygrape In reply to Soul-Of-Fire [2004-08-12 07:26:30 +0000 UTC]
mwahaha, i have naughty thoughts
thanks, though ^^
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sleepdrunk [2004-08-12 03:47:25 +0000 UTC]
and now do you see why I put you down as my favorite writer...wow...this was great...time to fav
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moldygrape In reply to sleepdrunk [2004-08-12 04:40:53 +0000 UTC]
lol, thanks Daniel!! Glad you liked it ^^
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Pendragon2879 [2004-08-12 01:11:19 +0000 UTC]
And Moldy does it again!! SHE amazes me again to the point where I have no choice but to love her writing.
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moldygrape In reply to Pendragon2879 [2004-08-12 02:38:53 +0000 UTC]
lol awww, thank you Guy!
Glad you liked it ^^
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fragilemacabre [2004-08-11 22:51:01 +0000 UTC]
This memorizes me.
I think you mean "mesmerizes"
--susannah
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soloira [2004-08-11 16:47:33 +0000 UTC]
Way to go... u keep me dreaming of .... cant let go readin.... i picture every scene great writing
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moldygrape In reply to pm-grafix [2004-08-11 16:51:31 +0000 UTC]
slight sexual moments, i guess.
lol
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berryblistex [2004-08-11 05:37:06 +0000 UTC]
woah .. this is good... I'm surprised I read the whole thing.. I hate reading .. but this ..this rocks!!!. Nice work..
BerRy.
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renders you utterly useless>
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