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moldygrape โ The Great Fall
Published: 2004-08-16 04:08:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 197; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 8
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The once sky high emotionsThat carried this soul so far
Roughly slices downward
Hitting the solid rock bottom
To no ones ears does the sound reach
She simply lies there
Untouched and unseen
Perhaps she merely does not exist?
Yet what is existing
When one walks among the living
And feels so completely dead?
An acid passion formerly burning strong
Blackened through and through with hatred
Now dead from the great fall downward
A tricky game she tried to play
One misstep ripped her heart in two
Her rose colored vision
Now turned a cold black and blue.
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Comments: 18
This part is so wonderful!!!
A tricky game she tried to play
One misstep ripped her heart in two
Her rose colored vision
Now turned a cold black and blue.
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"An acid passion formerly burning strong" <----- What a great line.
I like the title too. A good way to express what it is like.
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Damn Sarah your coming along in such a way! Such imagery and its different than your older stuff. Wow, its all I can say is wow. I better stop. I might end up with your entire gallery in my favs. Wouldn't that be something?
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lol, thanks, Guy. 
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hmm never thought of it like that, i like it lots, very good piece!!
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Bravo ยกยก Bravo ยกยก Great ยกยก
Thats the way we feel, some so much sometimes ...
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Right there moldy. At 27 I would have to say that yes, it can feel like that but it can feel like nothing and everything in between. You'll know when you get there 
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very very interesting. I really like it. Wonderful job..
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The first line of the second stanza doesn't read well, in my view, however the rest seems quality enough.
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Very interesting perspective. I really like this piece. Excellent job 
Keep it real.
~Sha~
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Oo...hm...I think love would kinda feel like that. a very good way of putting it.
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