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[chorus:]I told you I had to go
Because I didnβt want you to know
Everything bottled up inside
Forever I must force this dark pain to hide
Keep in mind
This is for your own good
Silent I must always stay
Like the worthy friend should
With a brighter smile on your lips
And softer touch to your fingertips
I cant help but pull back and away
I want your happiness to always stay
Burden you with my problems I will not
Forever in this moment
I hope to stay caught
[chorus]
Hinted once or twice Iβve done
More interest from you
I have found none
To protect you from myself I will always try
And never again utter this tearful cry
[chorus]
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Comments: 33
"With a brighter smile on your lips
And softer touch to your fingertips"
This part would sound especially gorgeous when sung!!!
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I like it. Don't think its bad. You just have bad taste in your own gallery, kinda like you had no taste in music compared to me. Lol
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LOL
hah, thats a good one....
you having better taste in music than ME.
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What!? I always had better taste than you cal! Don't deny the truth this late in the game.
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HAH!
such nonsense you do speak.
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this is amazing i dont know what you are talkin bout this blows my shit out of the water imma be watchin you your amazing
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I really love this, it conveys a meaning to me, like so mcuh great work can do.
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You're so very welcome!
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very very beautiful. i like this, wonderful work!
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Donβt get too caught up in rhyming. Personally, I try to rhyme only when a rhyme works. If a sentence sounds better without the rhyme, or thereβs a better word that solidifies the thought, then Iβll use that over the one that rhymes. *shrug* That may be just me.
Good job, though. I liked it.
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i'll keep that in mind. 
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lol, thanks *blush* grar, i hate it, tho
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once again you amaze me my friend...keep up the work...and do not worry, I hate everything I write as well
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lol, thanks daniel 
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This isn't horrible, you fool 
Keep it real.
~Sha~
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i like it lots, i wish i could hear it in song form though
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thanks ^^ if ~punkgoddess likes it, then we'll most likely try to write music to go along with it
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That's really good. It would be an awesome song.
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*pish* i guess.
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Right-o, Geoff.
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"pish" as in "whatever".
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