Kurt-n-ToddCLUB [2004-08-18 05:27:38 +0000 UTC]

lol beautiful. Chicken is da bomb

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Jack-O [2004-07-21 01:22:16 +0000 UTC]

I ate a lot of chicken when I was in NY for some reason...lol mmmmmm

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shorelineviking [2004-07-20 23:39:58 +0000 UTC]

yo!

longtime noi see\talk\email!
i'm goin to be wrining more journals
oh ya, I LOVE CHICKENS!!!!!!!!


-what is life without friends?-

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Soul-Of-Fire [2004-07-19 04:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaaahhhhh fuck that's great I knew as soon as I saw the title that this would be fucked up. I love it
Keep it real.
~Sha~

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MoonlitShadow [2004-07-19 00:56:30 +0000 UTC]

i'm too full to become hungry from this...lol.

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RainAgain [2004-07-18 22:22:47 +0000 UTC]

mmm good chicken, good poem. made me hungry.

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jahg [2004-07-18 13:59:47 +0000 UTC]

I can tell you were hungry, there are subtle overtones of it lurking somewhere in this piece, though it's quite nebulous. The simplicity of the language in the opening lines, indicative doubtless of the way in which hunger effects the brain, followed by the vernacular style of the second line - a startling commentary on the use of language in itself - encourages a smooth rhythm, only slightly disjointed in the last line-pair.

There's no sign here as to whether chicken was eventually procured, though I'd probably suggest that it was, otherwise I don't think you would revere that noble food so much in this poem.

Who'd have thought it, eh?

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