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Published: 2004-07-03 23:14:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 30; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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i hate youwith your hand around my neck
hitting me hard
knocking the life out of me
and i'm sure i've died
killed in the hands
of a drunken murderer
then morning comes
and i wake into consciousness
holding my head
trying so hard not to cry
it pounds with pain
you're beating me over again
aren't you?
being the coward that you are
you've run out the door
leaving me to heal
until the next time
there's always a next time
and it hurts more than the last
i dont dare leave
i know you can
and will
hunt me down
you always have
i have no chance of survival
fighting back would mean
a slow and painful death
more pain...
a thousand times worse
theres no end
to your drinking
your loneliness
your drunken rages
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Comments: 9
MoonlitShadow [2004-07-06 13:32:20 +0000 UTC]
interesting, way dark...maybe we can try a happy approach sometime?
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DarkRockFaerie [2004-07-04 11:50:22 +0000 UTC]
hhmm.... I like it!!! I was a little drunk last night..... but never would go that far...... I loved how you wrote it though
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subtlenuances [2004-07-03 23:24:58 +0000 UTC]
Intense....you handled this subject well. Written very well....
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moldygrape In reply to subtlenuances [2004-07-03 23:25:42 +0000 UTC]
thanks...i have another to submit....eh...
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