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you cant seehow you rip me apart
each day
every time i pass you
you turn your head
in complete disgust
making my throat close
holding back my tears
should i approach you?
or should i keep this mask
to cover what i feel
on forever?
i know
you hate me
wont trust me again
and it makes me hate myself
more than ever
you make me
want to die
painfully
i deserve this fate
cant eat
cant sleep
wont speak
i'm driven insane
with this guilt in my gut
if a knife
does not take my unworthy life
i'm sure my broken heart
will put a permanent stop
to my slowing pulse
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Comments: 8
sparklesatine [2004-06-15 05:34:47 +0000 UTC]
Awwww... poor Sarah. Very depressing painful poem-which is I guess appropriate right now. I love the way you express yourself in your poems. They're very good.
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moldygrape In reply to sparklesatine [2004-06-15 22:38:08 +0000 UTC]
thanks, glad you like em. i donno, i think i can express myself better thru my poetry...but sometimes i cant find the words which SUCKS.
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punkgoddess [2004-06-15 01:36:52 +0000 UTC]
...i don't hate you...and you look away just as often...i feel the same...i want to approach you...like today in the office.
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moldygrape In reply to punkgoddess [2004-06-15 01:42:01 +0000 UTC]
yah? did you see me look back??
...this is why i dont make friends...they hurt...really bad...
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Pendragon2879 [2004-06-15 00:53:40 +0000 UTC]
you really love depressing me don't you. Painful...
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moldygrape In reply to Pendragon2879 [2004-06-15 01:22:32 +0000 UTC]
sry...but i'm hurting pretty bad... sry.
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MoonlitShadow [2004-06-14 23:32:16 +0000 UTC]
very nice, the emotion in this gives a great great flow to this poem. wonderful job.
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