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Published: 2004-06-12 01:10:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 25; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description fall nack into your corner
into the shadows
away from the light

it burns your eyes
making you brim with tears
people stare
as you glance away
unable to meet their gaze

dont show what you feel
because then they know
they've won

you cant run
but you can hide

so fall back into your corner
that familiar corner
into the shadows
away from the light
and cry
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Comments: 6

mutexvoice [2004-06-12 02:22:56 +0000 UTC]

I dunno, but I think it's good. It's cool. Not as bad as you say...actually, not bad at all.

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moldygrape In reply to mutexvoice [2004-06-12 02:23:26 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^ i'm a perfectionist, so...

thanks again.

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Pendragon2879 [2004-06-12 01:20:35 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Its like my life story.

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moldygrape In reply to Pendragon2879 [2004-06-12 01:21:34 +0000 UTC]

really? *surprised* i think this poem sucks...but hey i'm glad you liked it

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Pendragon2879 In reply to moldygrape [2004-06-12 01:24:39 +0000 UTC]

I like it because its me. you got me.

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moldygrape In reply to Pendragon2879 [2004-06-12 01:26:01 +0000 UTC]

MWAHAHAHA! thanks. it's cool to think that my poems mean something to people

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