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Published: 2004-06-01 22:43:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 32; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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fill my wingslift me up
and away from here
sing me a song
about the freedom and happiness
we all dream of
write me the words
once spoken from your lips
for i long to hear them again
run with me into the darkness
that is the future
and hold me there forever
never let me go
or i might fall
for my strength is gone
fly away with me
and be forever mine
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...okay i've got and good comment and a bad comment to this...my angel (good side) speaks first...
"I really like this poem, it's inspiring and I can relate, it reminds me of how we all want to fall in love, and when we do, we never want to let go of that person...NEVER..."
and here's my bad side....
"I thought you hated/didn't belive in love."
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i dont. i wrote this for all your beleivers.
it's something i wish for. but i dont beleive in wishes either.
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"Don't find love, let love find you. That's why it's
called falling in love, because you don't force
yourself to fall, you just fall." ...i think you're just trying to fall honestly...but that is just my opinion...if you don't believe in wishes don't wish that you'll fall in love with someone...it's too much work...it'll come to you eventually...i promise...you will find someone...it may not be today, it may not be tommorrow, but when it does happen, don't try to push it away, let it fade if it wants to...love is precious but it hurts like hell...believe me.
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and besides...sometimes you fall in love...but you eventually get back up and walk away from it...
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you know what I CAN'T STAND YOU...i ALWAYS TRY AND GIVE ADVICE OR SAY SOMETHING...AND THEN YOU HAVE TO BE A MEAN ASS FUCKING BITCH BACK...WHAT THE HELL IS YOUR FUCKING PROBLEM? IF YOU DON'T CARE WHAT I SAY YOU CAN BLOW IT OUT YOUR ASS...BUT WHY THE HELL DO YOU ALWAYS HAVE TO BE "FUCK THIS.." AND "FUCK THAT" ...no wonder.
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you had NO RIGHT to tell me how i'm doing this or that wrong. i'll say what i fuckin' want.
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I really like this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It makes me a little sad yet inspired. Great descriptive words and everything!! Props to you.
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Nice, I finally have inspiration. I am gonna write something similar to this, in that it will be my idea of what it is like to be in love. Because I have never been in love.
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same. i hope to be someday...
good luck!! yay, i am glad to be of some help.
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